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[Herr D]

With a Pegasus theme, you might consider holsters, etc, that look like fetlocks? Or a mane sheath?

[ams]

Looks great! Very clean cut, golden ager. The image screams “good guy”. Are you going to highlight him up?

[Alexander of Limbo]

one thing though, the left side of the belt appears to be hovering off of the body. Still damn awesome though

[Scatman]

Great character!

[livewyre1014]

another WIP…revamp of the adult Secret after she returned during the Conspiracy storyline.

[JR19759]

Looks sexy. Great posing.

[livewyre1014]

thanks, here’s the polished version. I put in the background image to show the Secret when she started vs the Secret all grown up. Hope y’all like her!!!

[ams]

Love it. Great touch placing the before picture in the background! Cheers!

[livewyre1014]

thank you my friend!

[Vampyrist]

I agree, it is a great touch, it really shows the progression.

[CantDraw]

Very cool

[Scatman]

simply delicious’What a great pose tall ,long legs…all and all great looking character!

[livewyre1014]

Alright, new concept presented for your critiques/ideas. I call him EMS, the Emergency Medical Superhero. Thoughts or ideas before I polish the final design?? Almost forgot…many thanks to the talented Mr. AMS for the pose!!!

[Herr D]

Two thoughts? 1. Did you choose to have the non-equal-arm cross for copyright reasons? Traditionally even though the red cross logo is copyrighted they don’t object to seeing it used. They actually encourage it. I haven’t got full net access right now, but it’s my understanding that M*A*S*H didn’t have to pay to use it, and neither do ‘future ambulances’ in time-travel movies. If it still might not clear moderation, you might try altering an equal-arm red with a second one in powder blue (or some other color-matching alteration.)
2. Does he heal by magic or are you adding gear?

[livewyre1014]

Thanks to Herr D, both great ideas to improve my design. This is why I always appreciate the input of my fellow machiners. Here’s the new design for the speedster paramedic EMS!!!

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