LiveWyre’s Freelance Comics

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May 9, 2014 at 10:38 pm #39937

ams
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He looks great, livewire! I like the 1st version’s mask better without the insignia. Makes him darker. The right foot needs to go up a bit to even out with the left, but that is me being picky. Overall, very strong visual character. He looks like a gun-for-hire, merc type of villain. Awesome job!

Cheers!

May 10, 2014 at 9:36 am #39943

livewyre1014
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Thanks AMS…as always you see the little flaws I don’t haha.

May 10, 2014 at 3:34 pm #39956

livewyre1014
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Another update on a villain design. The only person who can keep up with the leaping lawman in a jumping contest…the FLEA!!!

May 10, 2014 at 4:30 pm #39957

livewyre1014
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Still updating villains…this time the primal force of nature…GORE!!! This one I would like some feedback on please. I like the design, but not sure what’s missing or whats too much…just know something’s not right…thoughts?

May 10, 2014 at 6:29 pm #39958

Herr D
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. . . there’s no–gore? My wife, Sunni D, added that she thinks it’s too horny. (If anyone would know, it would be her. She’s lived with me.)

May 10, 2014 at 10:48 pm #39969

Vampyrist
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Flea’s awesome and Gore is also good, but perhaps his legs are too plain. I’d also link the bandolier chain to the top belt chain and perhaps flip the bottom one so the lower end is on the same side as the shoulderpiece. Just some ideas.

May 11, 2014 at 4:47 am #39980

Mad Jack
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Wouldn’t dare to criticize other peoples work since beauty is in the eye of the beholder, so I leave it at praising those works I personally really like.

I absolutely love your Flea – he really looks like a pesky little leech. Very badass!

May 11, 2014 at 11:36 am #39987

livewyre1014
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Thanks guys…here’s the final version of the GORE redesign. still trying to get my shading back to good haha.

May 14, 2014 at 1:27 pm #40085

livewyre1014
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New villain!!! HotHead!!!!

May 14, 2014 at 1:38 pm #40086

JR19759
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Wooooooooooow. That shadingâ€¦.. IS AWESOME!
I won’t make a comment about Ghost Rider.

May 14, 2014 at 2:17 pm #40090

Trekkie
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What are you talking about JR, I can’t see any resemblance at all.
I agree though, great shading

May 14, 2014 at 2:31 pm #40093

Jeimuzu
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Just awesome!

May 14, 2014 at 6:37 pm #40108

livewyre1014
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For Lord Obsidious, my take on his character Lioness Rampart!!!

May 15, 2014 at 1:08 pm #40126

CantDraw
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Hothead, Gore, and Flea are totally wicked!

May 15, 2014 at 4:41 pm #40136

Stulte
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Lioness is great! Love the warm colours.
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