LiveWyre’s Freelance Comics

[RobM]

The cross on the mask is a really great addition.

[livewyre1014]

And here he is, the super speed medic…EMS!!!

[ams]

Very cool!

[livewyre1014]

Up next…a mercenary ninja assassin…the Shadow Serpent!!! Opinions or critiques before I polish the design are, as always, welcome.

[Vampyrist]

Nice, my only critique is that the ribbing seems flat. This can be fixed by zypping, though it may also be done by darkening color 2. I’d suggest a mix of the two. Good job on him either way.

[livewyre1014]

Here’s a concept Im working on…working name is the All-American!! What do you guys think??

[Alexander of Limbo]

very nice, however the arm and wrist bands appear to hover/ But otherwise very nice , just don’t give him a shield =P

[livewyre1014]

Here’s the finished All American!!!

[Alexander of Limbo]

very nice

[Scatman]

the only thing that stands out from the shadow serpent is the eye area looks alittle off.maybe weaking a bit would bring the eyes some good placement.I usually do the face with a already made face to place the eyes and nose,then go ahead and cover it with the mask.Just a suggestion.otherwise I too love that ribbibg idea,cool character!

[livewyre1014]

Working on some designs for a writer friend of mine. He’s working on an AMAZING series of stories, and I’m helping him design the characters. I promised not to give away any or his story ideas, but I wanted y’all’s ideas on some of the concepts I’ve got. All I can say about this one is she is a “super soldier” kinda archetype. Thoughts??

[Scatman]

The uniform is great,it’s the lower half that looks alittle large.The legs and feet seem to bloat as you go lower .other than that I really dig the design.And if you meant to give it that strong stance look than don’t do anything.I hope I was a help.

[livewyre1014]

you are always a help my friend. Thanks.

[ams]

Great design. I agree with Scatman about the lower half looking bigger. I think it’s just the boots though that need to slim down a bit. I would also flip the green “buckles?” on the boots to keep the curve lines parallel with the top of the boot lines. Raise the whole head to show more of the neck and drop the hand and glove items lower to increase arm length. Colors are bang on. Can’t wait to see it when you trick it out with the highlights. Cheers!

[livewyre1014]

Thank you to AMS and Scatman for their help with this one. Two of my favorite machiners helping me out like that is pretty awesome. Does this second draft look better??

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