Monthly Archives: February 2012

META: Traveling Day

I'm flying back to Durango today, so I'll be scarce 'round these parts.

I don't think the story telling thing is going to work after all, so let me know if you have any ideas for features you'd like to see regularly run here on the blog and maybe we can come up with some replacements.

Otherwise, this is an open thread, talk about whatever you like!

Tori Spelling is OLD, yo

(From "Blue Bolt" number 2, 1940.)

META: Commissions

Totally random, but would anyone be interested in commissioned artwork from me, the kind of thing you'd get from an artist at a convention? So you'd say "Jeff, I want a drawing of Catwoman kicking a thug in the face". You'd pay me $x, I'd create your drawing, and Bob's your uncle.

Open Critique Day 33

Although my new full-time (non-HeroMachine) job might keep me from actually getting to these before this afternoon, it's time for another Open Critique Day!

If you have a HeroMachine illustration or another piece of artwork you've done that you'd like some help with, post a link to it in comments along with your thoughts on it -- what you think is working, what you're struggling with, etc. I will post my critique of the piece, hopefully giving some tips on how to improve it.

Of course everyone is welcome to post their critiques as well, keeping in mind the following rules:

  • Make sure your criticism is constructive. Just saying "This sucks" is both rude and unhelpful without giving specific reasons why you think it sucks and, ideally, some advice on how to make it better.
  • Each person should only post one illustration for critique to make sure everyone who wants feedback has a chance.
  • I will not critique characters entered in any currently running contest, as that doesn't seem fair to the other entrants. You can still post it if you like for the other visitors to critique, but I will not do so.

That's it! Hopefully we can get some good interaction going here and help everyone (me included!) learn a little bit today.

(Image ©2011, Inkygirl.com.)

Seriously?

(From "Blue Bolt" number 2, 1940.)

Bikers! And not the Lance Armstrong kind.

In our previous installment of "Freeway Road Warrior But Not the Mel Gibson One Oh Hell Let's Call It Highway Warrior Instead", we were debating whether or not to raid the rotted corpse of the local DJ. Knowing the personal hygiene habits of your average radio personality and the virulence of the various organisms usually living on them, I'm dubious that searching this rotted husk is a good idea. Nonetheless, that's what we decided to do:

Do we want any med kits? Speak up in comments either way.

Meanwhile:

Despite our shockingly low Stealth score, somehow I actually rolled well for once and we got above a 9! Maybe the Austin air is blowing a fair wind on my dice ...

Wait a minute, why is it called Stealth if they meant Dexterity? We didn't hide from the bikers, we rolled out of the way. Whatever.

The good news is we're alive with no damage, and now we get to decide on the form our swift, savage justice will take!

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Frankly I see us as more of the stand far away and shoot people type rather than up-close and personal, but maybe you're feeling especially Rambo-esque today.

"General Washington, presence of skinny dippers confirmed, sir!"

(From "Blue Bolt" number 1, 1940.)

The Reason Quasars Exolode

My main problem with Quasar's costume is the combination of the headpiece and the cape:

The cape portion covers his shoulders and upper chest, and looks full, heavy, and massive. Combined with the chin covering I feel like his entire top half is weighted down. Leaving off the crown to expose his hair adds to the confusion: though you'd think it would free up the claustrophobia, in a strange way it contradicts the feeling of the cape and creates some confusion, at least for me.

I do like how the interior of his cape reflects space, as if it's some kind of portal. But otherwise the colors and other bits lack imagination and style, leaving me a bit cold. Plus having bracelets on top of full gloves is weird, like my "two boots" aversion.

Overall I'd give Quasar a "C" for a couple of nice elements offset by a dull design and a suffocating top half. How about you, what would you say about this costume?

Life after the Finishing Move

(From "Blue Bolt" number 2, 1940.)

Godzilla vs. Optimus Prime

Two titans battling it out in the heart of a major city, one atomic-fire-filled giant lizard and one space alien transforming robot! It's technology versus biology, West versus East, rubber suit versus CGI in a battle for the ages. Who will win? Only you can decide!

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Lay out your case in the comments and may the vest best giant creature win!