Share Day / Open Critique Day #3

Posted on April 21, 2013 by | 9 Comments

It is Sunday morning and time to share. So show us your art or tell us one of your stories, let us see how artistic you have been.

Rules for posts, contests, and challenges that I am hosting: Original characters only, no copyrighted characters, no characters based on copyrighted characters, no characters based on RPG’s or other games. The characters must be your own design and not based on any character that might be copyrighted in any way. I have the right to delete any post that I believe crosses this line without warnings.

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9 Responses to Share Day / Open Critique Day #3

  1. Brynn says:
    April 21, 2013 at 9:47 am

    Here’s a thing where I really don’t know how to go on now: http://diepraktikantin.deviantart.com/art/King-of-Mountains-WIP-update-355961852?q=gallery%3Adiepraktikantin&qo=1

  2. Harlequin says:
    April 21, 2013 at 12:14 pm

    So i want to know what you think this composition.

    This is my Princess of Elements series.
    http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/7009/harlequinhimes.png

    Hi no Hime – Tüz Hercegnője
    Cucsi no Hime – Föld Hercegnője
    Kaze no Hime – Szél Hercegnője
    Mizu no Hime – Víz Hercegnője

    The four picture made 100% with HM3 i only use MS Paint for cropping and made this little montage.

    p.s. I use japanese and hungarian names. The elements and the princess word to rough for me. No harm for the english language but sometimes not show perfectly what i want to show it.

    Thanks the critiques.

  3. CantDraw says:
    April 21, 2013 at 1:22 pm

    I’d like some feedback on a character I’ve created for a story I’ve had in my head for some time. I plan on putting a background but haven’t had time yet.

    Full picture:
    http://www.heromachine.com/wp-content/legacy/forum-image-uploads/cantdraw/2013/04/anna.png

    Face:
    http://www.heromachine.com/wp-content/legacy/forum-image-uploads/cantdraw/2013/04/anna-face-1.png

  4. The Atomic Punk says:
    April 21, 2013 at 5:20 pm

    Brynn:
    Here’s a thing where I really don’t know how to go on now: King of Mountains

    Neat! Looks like a combination of dwarf mining technology and gnome masonry. Maybe some detail to the “mouth” such as torchlight or a mine shaft. Smoke coming out of the chimney would be a nice touch.

  5. Brynn says:
    April 22, 2013 at 12:43 pm

    The Atomic Punk: Neat!Looks like a combination of dwarf mining technology and gnome masonry.Maybe some detail to the “mouth” such as torchlight or a mine shaft.Smoke coming out of the chimney would be a nice touch.

    Thank you very much. I’ll give it a try.

  6. Herr D says:
    April 23, 2013 at 12:27 am

    @Brynn: I want to see the reason for the gears. If it’s to collect power, the stream. If it’s to ‘export’ ore, etc., a track or conveyor.
    @Cant: Sad face, because . . . she lost her sheath? Interesting pack.
    @Harl: 4 beauties. I’m only guessing that the rightmost one you spent less time on? She doesn’t look as good as the others, but I’m not sure why.

  7. TOOL says:
    April 26, 2013 at 6:29 pm

    Thought I would share a pic from my random file to break the silence. Enjoy!

    http://i1224.photobucket.com/albums/ee363/cameron_stanley_84/Randomness/dont-disrespect-aqua_1340435468_epiclolcom_zpscfa0fd74.png

  8. CantDraw says:
    April 27, 2013 at 9:31 am

    Herr D:
    She’s stuck in a land she doesn’t know or remember, and all she has is a leather bag with a few camping items and a sword. Thanks for noticing the pack.

  9. Jawsabi says:
    May 4, 2013 at 2:17 pm

    http://i1330.photobucket.com/albums/w574/Jawsabi/CSNOTSP_zps7113e626.png Umm… I can’t pick whether to keep the series, or just throw away the whole idea.