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June 5, 2013 at 6:12 pm #25830
livewyre1014ParticipantHere’s another design I’m working on for my writer buddy. This guy is a costume vigilante type. Thoughts or critiques again welcome.
June 5, 2013 at 8:49 pm #25835
WMDBASSPLAYERParticipantBadass! Got a name for him yet? If not, how about Jack Spade? Love the costume!
June 5, 2013 at 8:51 pm #25836
DiCicatrizParticipantInteresting costume. I like the use of the metallic knee pads as ribbing on the costume. Only areas I see are the knee pad and boot elements on his left leg are too wide. You might want to mask them closer together to be in proportion with everything else.
The metallic knee pad elements also have some errant corners jutting out. An easy fix for that is masking them to curved shapes (either the crescent or the circle) that have their edges lined up to the curves of his body.
June 6, 2013 at 8:08 am #25849
livewyre1014ParticipantRedesign of NHA247’s Silver Monk for winning my color my bad guy contest!!
June 7, 2013 at 10:10 pm #25905
livewyre1014Participantthis is what happens when I can’t sleep and I listen to 80’s music. I give you …the Night Ranger!!!
June 9, 2013 at 9:31 am #25977
ScatmanMemberexcellent!!
June 9, 2013 at 12:45 pm #25987
WeilynMemberWow! You need to listen to some more 80’s music, ‘cos that’s awesome!
June 11, 2013 at 8:16 pm #26111
livewyre1014ParticipantHere’s another for my team of minor villains based on office supplies…TR Binder!!!
June 11, 2013 at 10:26 pm #26115
amsParticipantAwesome characters! Love the office supply villains. Had two of my own way back when and never continued. Whiteout and Black Marcus. Maybe we should have them battle. Your take on the Silver Monk is kick-ass! Perfect placement of items for a more rounded character. TR Binder is cool!
Just went through your archive and can’t wait to see what you come up with next.
Cheers!
June 11, 2013 at 11:21 pm #26116
livewyre1014ParticipantI wanted to use Whiteout as a codename…but couldn’t think of what powers to give him. Thanks for the nice words and such!!
June 12, 2013 at 5:39 am #26127
prswirveParticipantAll these recent works of yours look awesome!
June 12, 2013 at 8:00 am #26132
ScatmanMembergreat work Lyv!
June 12, 2013 at 6:45 pm #26152
livewyre1014ParticipantThanks all. My writer buddy and I had to start new with some designs, but I didn’t want to lose this one since it was some of my best work. So I figured, why not make her a super cop and give my EMS speedster a partner?? So, here’s SWAT, Super Weapons, Armor, and Tactic officer!!
June 12, 2013 at 6:56 pm #26153
CantDrawParticipantSWAT looks awesome! The detail work is outstanding. I know this may sound silly but I love the cheekbones (I’m a face guy, so I notice these things). BTW, your characters are excellent, as well.
June 12, 2013 at 11:08 pm #26161
DiCicatrizParticipantSWAT looks badass! Love the armor and the coloring is impeccable

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