Share Day / Open Critique Day #3

It is Sunday morning and time to share. So show us your art or tell us one of your stories, let us see how artistic you have been.

Rules for posts, contests, and challenges that I am hosting: Original characters only, no copyrighted characters, no characters based on copyrighted characters, no characters based on RPG’s or other games. The characters must be your own design and not based on any character that might be copyrighted in any way. I have the right to delete any post that I believe crosses this line without warnings.

9 Responses to Share Day / Open Critique Day #3

  1. So i want to know what you think this composition.

    This is my Princess of Elements series.
    http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/7009/harlequinhimes.png

    Hi no Hime – Tüz Hercegnője
    Cucsi no Hime – Föld Hercegnője
    Kaze no Hime – Szél Hercegnője
    Mizu no Hime – Víz Hercegnője

    The four picture made 100% with HM3 i only use MS Paint for cropping and made this little montage.

    p.s. I use japanese and hungarian names. The elements and the princess word to rough for me. No harm for the english language but sometimes not show perfectly what i want to show it.

    Thanks the critiques.

  2. I’d like some feedback on a character I’ve created for a story I’ve had in my head for some time. I plan on putting a background but haven’t had time yet.

    Full picture:
    http://www.heromachine.com/wp-content/legacy/forum-image-uploads/cantdraw/2013/04/anna.png

    Face:
    http://www.heromachine.com/wp-content/legacy/forum-image-uploads/cantdraw/2013/04/anna-face-1.png

  3. Brynn:
    Here’s a thing where I really don’t know how to go on now: King of Mountains

    Neat! Looks like a combination of dwarf mining technology and gnome masonry. Maybe some detail to the “mouth” such as torchlight or a mine shaft. Smoke coming out of the chimney would be a nice touch.

  4. The Atomic Punk: Neat!Looks like a combination of dwarf mining technology and gnome masonry.Maybe some detail to the “mouth” such as torchlight or a mine shaft.Smoke coming out of the chimney would be a nice touch.

    Thank you very much. I’ll give it a try.

  5. @Brynn: I want to see the reason for the gears. If it’s to collect power, the stream. If it’s to ‘export’ ore, etc., a track or conveyor.
    @Cant: Sad face, because . . . she lost her sheath? Interesting pack.
    @Harl: 4 beauties. I’m only guessing that the rightmost one you spent less time on? She doesn’t look as good as the others, but I’m not sure why.

  6. Herr D:
    She’s stuck in a land she doesn’t know or remember, and all she has is a leather bag with a few camping items and a sword. Thanks for noticing the pack.

  7. http://i1330.photobucket.com/albums/w574/Jawsabi/CSNOTSP_zps7113e626.png Umm… I can’t pick whether to keep the series, or just throw away the whole idea.