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  • January 8, 2014 at 8:56 am #35888

    ExtremelyEPIC
    Participant

    Oh man…these are so cool…i envy you because some of these were like the things that i tried to make and…well…they didn’t end up so good. Embarassed

    January 10, 2014 at 8:49 am #35987

    JR19759
    Keymaster

    Thanks guys.
    @EE- I could say the same about your work.

    Anyway, more new stuff.
    Tech-Suit.png

    January 10, 2014 at 9:51 am #35990

    Hammerknight
    Participant

    Sweet design.

    January 10, 2014 at 1:42 pm #36003

    FRM
    Member

    love the way you did the shoulder guns.

    January 13, 2014 at 3:33 am #36069

    JR19759
    Keymaster

    Thanks guys.

    Anyway, I have this character that I need help with. I’m fairly happy with how he’s turned out overall but something just seems off. I haven’t shaded him yet or anything, because I wanted to get opinions on him before I finished up. So what do you guys think I could do to make him better. (I am considering changing the colours, but I don’t really want to have to pose the arms).

    Mad-Magician.png

    January 13, 2014 at 3:58 am #36070

    Legatus
    Participant

    You could try some color on the lower parts. Shoes and pants. Maybe use some gradients to fade them into that darkness of the upper part.

    January 13, 2014 at 6:20 am #36074

    CantDraw
    Participant

    I might show more tie and vest, as in take it up to the neck.

    January 13, 2014 at 6:40 am #36075

    Lightningsword
    Participant

    Maybe adding a little dark gray or brown to the coat would help.

    January 13, 2014 at 11:13 am #36083

    DiCicatriz
    Participant

    I agree with CantDraw about taking the visible clothing (necktie, vest) all the way up. His legs look a little short to me. Maybe extend his lower body down just a bit further.

    As far as coloring: Any shading that you do I would keep minimal and on the edges. Like maybe just the top hat, shoulders, the very tips/outside edges of the cape. The flat black is really working for this guy. :D Great design!

    January 13, 2014 at 11:49 am #36085

    JR19759
    Keymaster

    How does this look guys?

    Mad-Magician-1.png

    It certainly looks better to me.

    EDIT: Updated to add shadow under the chin.

    January 13, 2014 at 12:58 pm #36089

    Delirious AL
    Participant

    He looks like he wants to take my candy! :O

    January 13, 2014 at 2:06 pm #36094

    Legatus
    Participant

    He looks great. Really creepy!

    January 13, 2014 at 2:43 pm #36096

    Herr D
    Participant

    mmm. I think maybe the next thing is to make a translucent rabbit/dove leaping from his hands to scratch out the viewer’s eyes. Maybe it’s a pterodactyl and banks to our right first with translucent force lines showing it’s path. That would also ‘explain’ why we can’t really see the arms. Nice one.

    January 13, 2014 at 2:45 pm #36097

    JR19759
    Keymaster

    We need a dove on heromachine for magician characters. dblade or MadJack, if you’re reading this……….

    January 13, 2014 at 4:34 pm #36098

    Mad Jack
    Participant

    Patience you must have my young padawan… ;)

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