HeroMachine Character Portrait Creator

I agree with Herr D, Charcoal and Gold Star are truly well made. Also, i would add The Young American, since i simply like how he looks.

Lull-carae opinion time!

– Female characters (Nike, Ripariana and HB) look nice in my opinion. Not overdone in any way, colors feel nice, also well chosen pieces of armor/clothes/things they wear

– Dwarfs look truly dwarfy. Short, armored like little tanks, and holding axes as big as they are. Wonderful!

– Snack and Target (especialy Target) are kind of creations not many people make, and not very often. They are nice, well made, without any kind of mistakes or errors in them. Simply great!

Overall, great (+1) for every great creation of yours!

Quite good piece of work! (the 3 Hoplites thing)

overall climate is very good, also the body differences of the two male hoplites made me really happy, thanks to it, they don’t look like twins/clones/aliens, and creation feels more natural and accurate!

Armor desing is good ofc (not like i know anything about armors, or how good armor should look like, but that’s my opinion)

Overall, everything looks fine. But then, after a while, i noticed something. Not sure what, but there is one strange piece between female hoplite hips and right male hoplite hips. It doesn’t make creation bad, since it’s proably here by mistake or something, and it isn’t that visible.

But anyway, this piece deserves very nice shiny (+1) in my opinion!

I have no idea how to make good transformation-in-progress characters.

I bet i wouldn’t even know how to start, or how to end this kind of character.

BUT…

i am pretty sure this is one great piece of transformation! I mean, look at it! I can easly imagine him slowly transform thanks to the so fitting geometric transition line between his human and crystal form. Also, i am in love right now with the fact how you made his crystal part of body so reflective and shiny in comparison to the his skin, or anything else!

Background fits great, his armor on mannequin and what he wears now are also well made. Also, i can easly see from where light shines on him, armor, and everything on this piece of creation, you did it so well, so congratulations on that also.

Anyway, as i said, i might know nothing about this kind of creations, but you deserve big and strong (+2) for that!

She looks like she can stay calm even after close proximity explosion with that “it’s not that i care, i am just fine with it and everything else” face and cool pose (that’s my opinion, and that opinion is meant to be positive!)

to put it simply – yet another character that’s really well made, and that clearly have own personality! (and that’s great, yay!)

nice (+1,5) for that lady and her creator!

[attempting innocent look] Whatever do you mean by THAT, Cliff?  It’s just an obvious blend of cricket, earthworm, and human . . . it should’ve been thought of YEARS ago . . . [looks at chronometer] Thank you, though–from our perspective, orig. Star Trek did stick to too many regular humanoids . . .

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“Behind every archvillain facing down a superhero is a sidekick ready to make a name for themselves.”–Camo

Camo took down, restrained, and on rare occasions killed opponents for his mentor while his mentor drew all their fire and most of the media attention. Avastro discovered that the antennae on his supersuit were fake and broadcast that information before being, well, SILENCED. There are some secrets the public might not be ready for, right?

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*sides

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“Esther On Routine”

“–I don’t understand this clause. We’ll own the condo, but aren’t allowed to accept packages or move things we find right outside the door or change the hanger on the doorknob. That makes no sense to me. This is the sixtieth floor. No one can even get up here.”

“That, sir, is part of the ownership contract. Not negotiable. You will rescind your membership and be evicted immediately if you are found non-compliant.”

“I’m not saying I won’t agree. I very much want to own this condominium. The Cloud is wonderful and surprisingly inexpensive on this floor.”

“Indeed, sir. Please sign this non-disclosure agreement.”

“Uchhh. Fine.” [signs] “But seriously, what is this for?”

“The previous owner of The Cloud had a granddaughter named Esther. The building wasn’t called that then, and this was quite some time ago.”

“Yes?”

“Esther is deformed and disabled, has the mentality and disposition of a sweet, dutiful, and productive four-year-old. She collects the dirty towels and leaves clean ones. The staff puts out the dirty ones for her.”

“Wait, what?”

“She checks the door hangers to know how many to leave. She’s very quiet. She makes her rounds between three and four a.m. If you see her, the clauses on how to conduct yourself around her are in the section marked “Rules Of Conduct.” These rules DO apply to your visitors and guests.”

[flips pages] “This? No saying anything to her but these phrases?”

“Thank you, Hello, Goodbye, and Good Job. You may also call her Esther. She has a routine. She wears a maid’s uniform, carries an old feather duster behind her ear.”

“Are there other maids I could confuse her with?”

“No, she is rather, DISTINCTIVE, we say, sir. Slightly deformed, warty, thick glasses, barely four feet tall. Our regular maids wear street clothes when on the sixtieth floor so as not to worry her. You must understand, this is how she is.”

“So she doesn’t actually clean the rooms?”

“Oh, no sir. Her keys to the rooms don’t even fit. She has no elevator pass, and she wears an alarm belt to alert us if she ever does attempt to leave. She passes between doing laundry, watching recorded cartoons on a loop, eating the meals we leave for her, sleeping, hygiene, and her rounds. We think she thinks her family is on vacation instead of deceased these fifty-odd years now.”

“How old is she now?”

“Ninety-six, sir. If this is a problem, there are other floors. They are more expensive, but you understand. The sixtieth floor is exclusive to people known for behaving themselves, sticking to routine, and following rules. I’ll be in my office when you decide. Take your time.”

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*OPMC

[licks own beak] Stor-rrreeeey. So the relic probably empowers London Fog’s eventual archenemy, if it’s not the cause of his own power by injustice transference. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I’m sure once you get a good handful of artwork on here, people will start giving good advice, tips and critiques. Your English is quite good, so no worries there my friend.

[quote=138398]Design is good back story is even better , makes me want to get back into writing my characters back story again[/quote]

Good indeed. Your summary seems like it’s based on the first novel of an author who likely bungled it, making it way too long so the screenplay turned out much better. I’ve seen a lot of that.