Reply To: G. W.'s New Superverse

Charles Canis (Wolf):

Basically the same thing as every other Charles Canis backstory I’ve written. Canis fought in World War II. On the way back, his ship crashed on a tiny island. The survivors found a mysterious spring, which, as Canis would later learn, grants immortality, as well as enhanced strength, speed, and endurance. One by one, all of the other survivors died, falling off of cliffs, drowning, burning, or being devoured by the wolves. By the mid ’60s, Canis was the only one left alive. Somehow, he managed to survive on his own until the late 2010s, at which point he was discovered by a “small fishing boat” (actually sent by the Warrior, who had heard rumors of mysterious occurrences on the island, and who had long before discovered strange things on nearby islands). Just before boarding the boat, Canis got bit in the leg by a wolf. The bite knocked him out for the duration of the trip, but, upon arrival in Maine, he transformed into a wolflike creature. He was quickly knocked out again, and, when he awoke, he was fully human with the Warrior standing over him.

Canis has the ability to transform into his wolf-like state at will (though there are different levels of transformation), although it can also be affected by strong emotion. If he is in a particularly uncontrollable state of emotion for too long, he could become permanently stuck as a wolf (a complete wolf, with no human attributes). He is also immortal, and has above-average strength, stamina, and durability.

I am far more satisfied with my new versions of both Canis (I especially think he looks better with a beard) and the Wolf (the slightly more humanoid features and bizarre eyes of previous versions were just disturbing) than previous incarnations, although the Wolf could still use a little work. Any suggestions for how to fix him?

Reply To: Nighthawks Nest

Cool creations! I really like your whole thread.

Reply To: Nighthawks Nest

CRYOGEN

Reply To: PLANET AMS

Fan art for 12for12.  Check out his characters…..  https://www.deviantart.com/12for12

Reply To: DJuby Gallery – Volume 2

CDC Prizes for Rossoftheyear…

and StarkillerX

Reply To: JR’s Characters

Crusher- Graham Bolton
Powers: Super Strength (5- 10x Normal Human Maximum), Superhuman Endurance, Increased Regenerative Capabilities and Resistance To Injury

Another product of the experimental drug that gave Red Kite her powers, Graham Bolton was an ex-athlete and current coach who ended up on the wrong side of some gang members due to gambling debts and a nasty reliance on illegal drugs. Upon getting his powers, Bolton would resort to crime in order to pay his debts.

Reply To: ONE PART, MANY CHARACTERS contest……

Thanks man. A bit late on the reply, but here’s my picks. As is kinda the staple of this contest, the creative usage of the items is what matters most. Oh and to address that question, no not really, i made that guy up at the same time.

1: Hair, Zombie
2: Neckwear
3: Head, Aliens

Reply To: The Legatus Universe

For the CDC : [b]Silver Fist, the Consort of Time[/b] [img]https://www.heromachine.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/10/Legatus-Silver-Fist.png[/img]

Reply To: The Legatus Universe

[b]New Paladins – Rapunzel[/b] : she has prehensile hair, which is superstrong and indestructible, can elongate up to 300 ft and she controls every single one of it

[img]https://www.heromachine.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/10/New-Paladins-Rapunzel.png[/img]

Reply To: ONE PART, MANY CHARACTERS contest……

Characterizing this week’s competition: genre portraiture. F=Funkmachine, M=Maaz
There were no backgrounds, no backstories, and bonus for F, but not M.

Most of the other categories were tentacle to tentacle, so it came down to items.

The items: Every item was used for one point. Every item was well-placed and belonged for the second 
point. I’m all about the misuses. The ribbon-caption item seemed much more realistic (almost too subtle
for me to pick out) in the way it shaped and flowed for Maaz. His character wore it better. The dagger
somehow seemed less contextually and emotionally tied to the pic than the horns. (It might've been more
 
of a difference, but part of that effect was dimmed by the 'bull' facing the viewer.)

The stethoscope was what made the biggest difference. F's misuses may have left out the earpieces 
entirely, where M's helmet seemed a bit off. Then M went and made the holster straps! That was some 
excellent work.

BTW, F's neckpiece was interesting and worthy of mention. M? Was this an edit of a previous work? Not 
against the rules, just asking.

M! Pick 3, set a deadline. You win the round.

Backstory score:….F0....M0
Bkgd score:……….…..F0....M0
Item STETH:…………......…F3…….M5
Item TAIL:. …….......…F3...M2.5
Item RIBBON-CAPTION: …F3…..M4
Bells: ……………........….F2...M2
Whistles: …….....…..….F2…….M2
Items-story:………......…F2…..M3
Emotional:………......…..F3…….M2
Bonus:…………..........……F.5..M0
Total:……….........………F18.5.M20.5