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I think his face is awesome.

I can see what you were going for with the yellow costume (trying to make him look like a gold candlestick), but I’m not really a huge fan of the colour choice. It swamps the glow from the flames and makes it much less impressive than it would have looked with a darker colour, or a colour the is radically different to the glow colour. But that’s just my opinion. Also, I’ve just noticed that the bottom half of the robe doesn’t match up properly with the top half where they meet around the waist. They match on the outside but the inner edge is slightly out of line. Maybe mask each side to an individual square and adjust the width to fit.

But still, I like the overall look of the character (if we take the yellow out of the equation) and the concept it pretty cool. Few minor tweaks needed that’s all.