Open Critique Day #7

Alright! It's time for another Open Critique Day!

As for how this goes, you post a work of yours, finished or WIP (aka work in process, for those who are new to abbreviations), and then others give you critiques on your work.  I do not mind if you post the occasional non-HM picture or piece of writing, but keep in mind that, though there are some, not all of us here are writers or do art outside of HeroMachine. All I ask is that you only post pictures that are your own design and not any that copyrighted or based off of copyrighted characters. As for pieces of writing, I’m not sure about whether fan fiction is allowed, but for right now, just in case, don’t post fan fiction either.

Also, again, if you post a work, it is highly recommended that you also give someone else a critique.

4 Responses to Open Critique Day #7

  1. Vincent says: i reposted no critiques were given last time.

  2. Linea24 says:

    @Vincent: That looks really cool! At the moment, I don’t really see anything that could be improved on.

  3. Worf says:

    @Vincent: Looks pretty good. The only thing that is a little off, for me, is the right foot and the right hand. The lines on the foot don’t quite line up with the lines on the leg and the hand seems a little too big for the wrist. Most people wouldn’t even notice them, but it’s a pet peeve of mine, so I usually look for those. Otherwise, nice job.

  4. Herr D says:

    I would have put the energy blast between us and the hand. Translucent, of course.