OCD (Open Critique Day) #26

How this goes:  You post a work of yours, finished or WIP, and then others give you critiques on your work. I do not mind if you post non-HM pictures or piece of writing. Just make sure that you only post pictures that are your own design and not any that are copyrighted or based off of copyrighted characters. 

Also, if you post a work, it is highly recommended that you also give someone else a critique.

By the way, from now on OCD will end Sundays  at midnight Central Time.

9 Responses to OCD (Open Critique Day) #26

  1. Pretty sure that should be number 26 Linea 😉

  2. @Lef: Whoops. Thanks, Lef. I’ll change that as soon as possible.

  3. http://www.heromachine.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/05/cerci.png
    I named this one Cerci mainly from the furs. Does anyone have a better name for her?

  4. Nord Ronnoc

    Third time posting this. Heh, sorry. Again, this is for a Mass Effect fanfic that occsionally crosses over with Fallout. This Courier has this armor/outfit later in the series. I’m going for the Star-Lord vibe (from the movie): http://imgur.com/0LwWsZy

    This is what he looks like in the Fallout universe and without the helmet: http://fogn.me/1xwuc

  5. @Keric: For a better name, I’d need a backstory, but Cerci’s good.
    @Mason: Shades darker on the cape? Since it’s in shade and all.
    @Nord: Textures on the surfaces? Gray kind of needs it. Masking Patterns really does slow hm, but the effect is usually worth it.

  6. Nord Ronnoc

    @Herr D: I’m a little lost. Could you clarify?

  7. @Nord: Masking patterns? To some of the gray surfaces?

  8. @ Herr, yeah, I did not have a back story on this one, she started from the pose.