Open Critique Day #H25

Here it is OCD. Let’s see what you have to share. I hope that everyone is having a wonderful day.

My rules for posts, contests, and challenges that I am hosting: Original characters only, no copyrighted characters, no characters based on copyrighted characters, no characters based on RPG’s or other games. The characters must be your own design and not based on any character that might be copyrighted in any way. I have the right to delete any post that I believe crosses this line without warnings.

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3 Responses to Open Critique Day #H25

  1. Weepingangel23@yahoo.com

    http://i.imgur.com/ttKLOk8.png
    A soldier of a generic opressive government.
    http://i.imgur.com/3LDstvb.png
    The General Infantry of a faction known as The Brotherhood of Shadow, or BoS for short
    http://i.imgur.com/Rml1NF4.png
    A “stormtrooper” for said group, specialized in running across battlefields into enemy lines.
    http://i.imgur.com/MGUb3cc.png
    A commander of the BoS, ruthless in personal combat, and excellent tacticians.
    http://i.imgur.com/ZhKd0y2.png
    And lastly, a demon by the name of Misery

  2. http://i.imgur.com/ttKLOk8.png
    A soldier of a generic opressive government.
    http://i.imgur.com/3LDstvb.png
    The General Infantry of a faction known as The Brotherhood of Shadow, or BoS for short
    http://i.imgur.com/Rml1NF4.png
    A “stormtrooper” for said group, specialized in running across battlefields into enemy lines.
    http://i.imgur.com/MGUb3cc.png
    A commander of the BoS, ruthless in personal combat, and excellent tacticians.
    http://i.imgur.com/ZhKd0y2.png
    And lastly, a demon by the name of Misery
    *Fixed name*

  3. Coexist23: http://i.imgur.com/ttKLOk8.png
    A soldier of a generic opressive government.

    General policy is one character per OCD. Usually, you will only get a critique of the first. That being said, I like the soldier’s overall vibe. Effective color-scheme. The logo on the rifle is a good touch. It breaks up the monotony; however, it also draws attention to the fact that the rifle is not masked to the hand.