Weekend Open Critique Day #H18

Time for another OCD. Let’s see what you have for us today. I hope that everyone is having a wonderful weekend.

 

My new rules for posts, contests, and challenges that I am hosting: Original characters only, no copyrighted characters, no characters based on copyrighted characters, no characters based on RPG’s or other games. The characters must be your own design and not based on any character that might be copyrighted in any way. I have the right to delete any post that I believe crosses this line with “no” warnings.

16 Responses to Weekend Open Critique Day #H18

  1. I’m doing a new drawing of Sharal, one of the characters I’ve already uploaded. I’m pretty much going to re-do the costume. So far, I’ve got the anatomical outline done. In case you’re wondering, I’m going to put a sword-type weapon in her right hand, and a spell effect in her left. One of the things I had trouble with was her right leg – it was hard, given the angle and position which pretty much concealed an entire section of her leg. I also just noticed that I forgot her tail – that shouldn’t be too hard to fix. Any thoughts?

    http://www.heromachine.com/wp-content/legacy/forum-image-uploads/jadebrain/2013/03/scan0004.png

  2. Jadebrain:
    I’m doing a new drawing of Sharal, one of the characters I’ve already uploaded. I’m pretty much going to re-do the costume. So far, I’ve got the anatomical outline done. In case you’re wondering, I’m going to put a sword-type weapon in her right hand, and a spell effect in her left. One of the things I had trouble with was her right leg – it was hard, given the angle and position which pretty much concealed an entire section of her leg. I also just noticed that I forgot her tail – that shouldn’t be too hard to fix. Any thoughts?

    http://www.heromachine.com/wp-content/legacy/forum-image-uploads/jadebrain/2013/03/scan0004.png

    Cool!

  3. Here’s a few contributions:

    Eat your heart out Marilyn Monroe!

    http://i1359.photobucket.com/albums/q794/niteridrr/pose2_zpsd24c7a5d.jpg

    There’s a new sheriff in town!

    http://i1359.photobucket.com/albums/q794/niteridrr/cgl1_zps768d2909.jpg

    Concept superheroine (haven’t given her an official moniker, yet) enjoying the sunset and breeze from high up.

    http://i1359.photobucket.com/albums/q794/niteridrr/ultra4_zps785cfd10.jpg

    And finally, a superheroine transformation animation.

    http://s1359.beta.photobucket.com/user/niteridrr/media/Super_zps3672a839.mp4.html

  4. Nite Rider: And finally, a superheroine transformation animation.

    http://s1359.beta.photobucket.com/user/niteridrr/media/Super_zps3672a839.mp4.html

    That was pretty cool. Props for that.

  5. And finally, a superheroine transformation animation.

    http://s1359.beta.photobucket.com/user/niteridrr/media/Super_zps3672a839.mp4.html

    The link times out. :/

  6. Prof. Abercrombie Q. Anthrax

    Worf: That was pretty cool. Props for that.

    I agree. Very well done.

  7. Prof. Abercrombie Q. Anthrax
  8. Are the emotions understandable? Anything else?

    http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u438/jamais5/2013hm/HerrD-ThePilotWasSick_zpse6cc1b6b.png

    @Prof: I like rain–add shadows? More clouds? Your Kim is interesting, too. You’re aquatic blends were better–
    @Markhor: He needs a dead body right behind him and a background.
    @Jadebrain: yes–Is Sharai’s tail good for balance?

  9. The Atomic Punk: The link times out. :/

    It’s only about ten seconds long. I may expand on it some.

  10. Prof. Abercrombie Q. Anthrax

    Herr D:
    Are the emotions understandable? Anything else?

    http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u438/jamais5/2013hm/HerrD-ThePilotWasSick_zpse6cc1b6b.png

    Certainly looks confused. :)
    I think it works just fine.

  11. Herr D:
    @Markhor: He needs a dead body right behind him and a background.

    Originally he did But I felt I would look to cluttered.

    but here is one with his cape.

    http://i1194.photobucket.com/albums/aa375/Therealquestion/pahlwithcloak.jpg

  12. http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/059/5/2/xiao_tou_the_little_thief_by_tarkarra-d5wj3k9.png

    What you think for him. I think one of my best cloth work. But i want to ask critique what need for the clothes

  13. “Nuclear Man: Don’t Get Fred Durst Angry!”

    I dunno, does anyone else see Fred Durst going nuclear, or am I just old?

    http://25.media.tumblr.com/cb6832ccdbb9ced6c9eac95bf720e008/tumblr_miowqjF1cb1r0136so7_r2_1280.png

  14. @prof: thx!
    @Markhor: like him better with cover and company.
    @Harlequin: Don’t touch the clothes. You might add the tip of the wallet or keyring bulge . . .
    @Quezz: this pic does say nuke to me.