Open Critique Day #H17

It is time again to show us your art and to ask us what we think. So have at it.

My new rules for all of my post: Original characters only, no copyrighted characters, no characters based on copyrighted characters, no characters based on RPG’s or other games. The characters must be your own design and not based on any character that might be copyrighted in any way. I have the right to delete any post that I believe crosses this line with “no” warnings.