I think it worked out pretty well- I can definitely see what you tried to do with the belly. Maybe you could do some masking with the jacket to make it look like it’s following the shape of his body? And maybe some shading under the bottom of the jacket would make it look less like it’s sitting flat against his body?

Here is Stocky Businessman With An Emo Haircut, original character do not steal.
Honestly, this started out as just an attempt at making a design with a stocky bodytype. It went to a weird place. I don’t think the attempt was terribly succesful. I tried getting his belly across with shading, but it didn’t quite work. It would have been easier if he was facing directly forward.
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Well as i keep drawing the characters i should write some more story.
But first lets put faces to most off the names.
Our narrator, Valius Marinus dressed in the full kit of legion 14.

Our leading lady, Iarrarl.

And her parter Amalie.

Her younger sister Ragnheior.

Fjorleif the Skull Maiden.

Veiakere the Corinthian from Iron League.

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With Bjarkmar slain, wordlessly Fjorleif half lead and half carried Iarrarl away from the crowd.
To the applause of the gathered crowd Ragnheior lifted Amalie over her shoulder and carrying her off to much laughter.
It was later at dusk when i next saw Iarrarl, her cheeks freshly tattooed and a big happy smile on her mouth, for with Amalie’s father dead there was nothing to stop there marriage.
It was

Made a little more progress, as in her husband his turned up and there’s a background.

Yep it time for more vikings.
Earconbert looks much less eager then Sveirj, but that’s the idea, he’s a sensible strait laced man that just wants to help his villagers prosper to her the adventurous free wheeler that wants to kill, pillage and fornicate.
This is DIESEL. An Air Force pilot turned superhero. He likes big guns and bigger explosions!
CDC- It’s All About You
Different variations of my name came up with some really weird results. I almost went with the cryomancer protecting Atlantis from the Yakuza… but I just couldn’t do the name Yellow Glacier without thinking of yellow snow. 😛 So this is the one I went with.
Shocker
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