Re: Nathanyael’s first pics

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Good stuff – I realised I’d seen your stuff before when I saw the bath image!

The prison image is very well done. These low-light images are tricky in HM (still working on some myself!). The challenge is that you want the female figure to be shaded and murky, but she still needs to be catching our attention. I would suggest lowering the level on the torch light and moving it quite a bit to the left, as it’s probably more prominent than it needs to be. You can then do some shading work on Myriam and the monster to make the scene look like it’s being lit from that side (highlights and lowlights!).

Hope that’s not too much advice… looking forward to seeing the next one.