Re: Mr. Chowderhead’s Stuff

[Shiboreth]

I dig Viperess’s design. I especially like the choice of the glowing around her belt.

As for another possible nitpicky tweak, with how big her bust is, the strap going from the shoulderpiece to the hip looks like it’s just “there” to me. It’s probably a combination of it being more or less one tone and the slight give between it and her side. In my personal experience, in order to hold the shoulderpiece to her body, it would fit somewhat to the curves to her body. It doesn’t have to look skintight (in fact it probably shouldn’t, since it’s not spandex!), but if it starts toward the top of the breast, it’s going to curve to the body a bit.

Alternatively, you could bring her bust size down a little bit, and that would probably do the trick too.