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My first attempt at a comic book cover. This one featuring my character, Flash, and ams’s character, Mob, which he created for my HeroMachine Team-Up Challenge, which he won. This is not his prize but I was inspired by his character to make this.

As this is my first cover attempt, I would really like to know how I did. The main questions I have about it is if the shadows being cut off at the sides is a problem. Also, the characters are supposed to be jumping down/falling. Does that come across? Any other critiques welcome, of course.