Reply To: Ghostrider001 SW FanFiction Characters

[LullabyOfTheSin]

Hey Luis

i like fanfiction of any sort, and characters from yours seems to be quite interesting and original. would be nice to see and read story behind other characters

as for any sort of criticism or observation… hmm… if it’s possible, try to use a little brighter shade of grey (or black, not sure how to say it). Ileana Vane helmet and other two guys chest clothes are so dark i have to watch really carefully to see details. On first view, these pieces llooks for me like black shape.

However, maybe only i see it like that (or maybe its something with my monitor), so you don’t have to do it, it’s only my personal, maybe wrong, suggestion