Open Critique Day #18

Just to remind everyone, if this is to stay around, then everybody needs to contribute. I would like to keep this going past #2o!

As for how this goes, you post a work of yours, finished or WIP (aka work in process, for those who are new to abbreviations), and then others give you critiques on your work.  I do not mind if you post the occasional non-HM picture or piece of writing. Just make sure that you only post pictures that are your own design and not any that copyrighted or based off of copyrighted characters. 

Also, if you post a work, it is highly recommended that you also give someone else a critique.

6 Responses to Open Critique Day #18

  1. Worf says:

    Went for the early post didn’t we? 😉

  2. Lull-carae says:

    I’ve never tried to write on Open Critique Day. Well, there is always a first time. I hope that the world will not explode because of me 😡
    I decided to insert here the latest version of Lullasy. I would like to learn how I can improve your pictures 🙂

    If you can, i ask you all for merciless criticism of this work. Do not worry, I won’t die from it ^^

  3. Linea24 says:

    @Worf: Yeah, though I’ve been doing it for a while now 🙂
    @Lull-carae: Well, I must say, for the first time since I started this, I’m unable to come with a critique for a work. All I can really say is that the tongue stands out just a tiny bit to me, but that’s all.

  4. Lull-carae says:

    @Linea24: ( . _.) Okay. Tongue. I will remember that. Thanks 🙂

  5. Keric says:
    I have come up with a new way to make lace.
    Normally I mask the lace bra, or another patterned piece.
    In this case, I used an all over pattern (on the skirt) and then placed pieces on top.

  6. JR19759 says:

    @Keric- What I’d say is that I’m not sure about the white part of the skirt really fits the rest of the costume. It might work better if the dress was a one piece dual colour with just pink and black and you used the white with pattern idea for a different dress or if you changed it to pink and made the bottom black, but that’s just my opinion. Also, the rose tattoo is a bit out of place and her right arm looks a bit odd, could do with moving up a few clicks. But other than that, your usual inventiveness with masking to create cool costume designs is all present and correct.
    Oh and @Lull-carae- For a critique, see this weeks COTW (apart from the fact you have 😉 )