Open Critique Day #13

Oh look. It's OCD #13 on Friday the 13th. Just an observation.

As for how this goes, you post a work of yours, finished or WIP (aka work in process, for those who are new to abbreviations), and then others give you critiques on your work.  I do not mind if you post the occasional non-HM picture or piece of writing. Just make sure that you only post pictures that are your own design and not any that copyrighted or based off of copyrighted characters. 

Also, again, if you post a work, it is highly recommended that you also give someone else a critique.

7 Responses to Open Critique Day #13

  1. Mardrak says:

    Finished it! Any other observations?

    Loved It The Detail Is Amazing

  2. Linea24 says:

    @Lef: That looks really cool! The whole thing just looks brilliant.

  3. Linea24 says:

    …And since there isn’t anyone else who has anything, I’ll go ahead and post something I’ve been working on recently.
    I have been meaning to do remake Arsenal (member of my Fantasy Force group) for a while now, as I lost the picture for her when my laptop’s hard drive crashed last summer. So here is what I have for her right now:

    At the moment, I feel like something is missing, plus something about her swords is bothering me, but I’m not sure what.

  4. Skoul says:

    I think Arsenal is pretty cool! As for the swords one of the blades looks slightly longer than the other and the elven greaves that you’ve used on the hilts aren’t aligned with their respective blades the same. As for the something missing, that’s up to you as the creator.

  5. Herr D says:

    Well, it is odd to wear armor and be barefoot? Maybe they don’t have caltropes or smash glass under their opponent’s feet on that world?

  6. Linea24 says:

    @Skoul: Well, I checked, and the blades are the same length, but I can see why you say that. Thanks
    @Herr D: Well…actually, her world is Earth…so that fact should have crossed my mind…:’)