Open Critique Day #2

Alright! It's time for another Open Critique Day!

(Thanks to Worf for this idea) This time around, I'm going to ask that if you want to post a work, you also give a critique to someone else. This is just to make sure that there is more than just one person giving critiques. And, since I'm sure that the question will pop up, if you are the first one to post something, come back later to critique someone else's work.

And one last thing: Should I change this to happen on Fridays, Sundays, or just keep it going on Saturdays?

As for how this goes, you post a work of yours, finished or WIP (aka work in process, for those who are new to abbreviations), and then others give you critiques on your work.  I do not mind if you post the occasional non-HM picture or piece of writing, but keep in mind that, though there are some, not all of us here are writers or do art outside of HeroMachine. All I ask is that you only post pictures that are your own design and not any that copyrighted or based off of copyrighted characters. As for pieces of writing, I’m not sure about whether fan fiction is allowed, but for right now, just in case, don’t post fan fiction either.