Your challenge this week is to come up with the best replacement dialog for this comics panel (courtesy of the Mighty God King):
The best entry (as judged by yours truly) wins the author's choice of either any item they like or any portrait to be included in HeroMachine 3′s final release, or a custom black and white “Sketch of the Day” style illustration (you pick the subject, I draw it however I like).
All entries must be left as a comment (or comments) to this post. Keep ‘em clean (appropriate for a late-night broadcast TV show), but most importantly, keep ‘em funny!
No limit to entries, but please, self-edit and only put up ones you genuinely think are good!
You’re all expelled
I’m a man hating lesbian
My milkshakes bring all the girls to the yard
You shall all be zombies right now
Due to budget cuts, the school is shutting down….go home
all of you shut up or leave
1) Greedo shot first
2) I’m Batman
I just took a job as a stripper!
I picture all of you naked when I teach!
1. God people it’s called Twitter! Look into it!
2. They’re real. End of debate!
3. Mama Spank!
4. Yes! I am Reggie’s Baby Mama!
1.MY FIRST PROM. 2.FACEBOOK IS NOT GOOD FOR U. 3. STOPING CLASS BY TROLLING
When I snap my fingers you will no longer be bees!
You kids do know he’s not a REAL Space Ranger, right?
1) “Wa-wa, wa-wa-wa waaa… D- !” (ala Peanuts trombone)
2) “Ph’nglui mglw’nafh Cthulhu R’lyeh wgah’nagl fhtagn!”
3) “If the answer was 42, you’d have graduated by now!”
“That’s it. Tomorrow, I’m bringing my taser.”
“Alright, I’m not allowed to discuss certain things that buzz, but I know one of you stole mine!”
3) What’s the buzz, tell me what’s a happening
1. I apologize everyone, I had Taco-Bell for lunch…
2. Chris we all know you’re a woman just come out with it
“You have been around since 1941 and you’re all still virgins!”
“How come you are the only comic book property nobody wants to make into a movie?”
1) (stricken for inappropriateness)
2) alright everybody class is dismiss and don’t forget get to make your own nuclear bombs
3) (stricken for inappropriateness)
!: We’ve been bought by Disney and your services are no longer required!
2: Classes this small are called “Special” for a reason, you retards!
3: Your homework assignment is to strip naked and binge drink!
4: We have just declared war on Iran, and you’re all being drafted!
5: I hit the lottery, bought Riverdale, and I’m kicking everyone out!
6: Now that the South Park kids have hit puberty, you’re being replaced!
7: You sound terrible! Everybody go home until your laryngitis clears up!
1. Give me your all your honey and I’ll give you all an A+.
2. I take it you’re all enthusiastic about the spelling bee?
3. No wonder we’re bee-hind all of the other schools!
4. You’re not bees! You’re hornets! Bee-lieve it!
1. I just took bath salts, and somebody’s going home without a face!
2. Halle Berry was a GREAT Catwoman!
3. My Pokemans, let me show you them!
4. Survey says…Richard Dawkins is dead. (too soon?)
5. None of you understand the true comic genius of Gilbert Gottfried.
NOTHING FUNNY?! Your homework, then, one paragraph describing the readers of this comic strip. Go look!
@Ian: Just so I’m clear on the subject… Do you care to clarify your #4?
1) Who let the dogs out! Roof, roof, roof, roof, roof!
2) ….You’re all a waste of space, You big disgrace, Guess I better show you who rules this place…. I will, I will, flunk you! (singing to the tune of Queen’s “We will rock you”)
Do your late homework now or ALL OF YOU ARE EXPELLED!
1. Why can’t you all be the students that text each other!!!
2. You all don’t shut up you’re gonna up living in a VAN DOWN BY THE RIVER!!!!!
3. YOU KNOW NOBODY READS YOUR COMICS ANYMORE RIGHT!!!?
4. You know what else Buzzes….a TAZER!!! and I just so happen to have one in my desk drawer
8: Okay, it’s true, I AM carrying Mr. Weatherby’s love child!
9: If you’re all buzzed, then it’s drug tests for everyone!
10: A writer’s strike has been declared! No more dialogue!
11: This is NOT what Public Speaking class is all about!
This one time at band camp…..
Your Hive Queen demands that you go out and make honey with a stranger!
If you don’t shut up now, I’ll make the lot of you take turns massaging my feet.
1. Listen up turdlings! My Martha Stewart bookmark is missing. Class is dismissed until I get back from the store.
2. Holy macaroni class! The schedule says it is Gay Pride Day. Quickly now, everyone head to the flag pole!
3. Who took the weed out of my book? That stuff will turn you into a zombie!
I hope you’ll be more polite during my sex ed demonstration with Mr. Weatherbee tomorrow.
I’m really a man
Todays lesson….My sex life
The score to last nights game was 35-2
There’s blood in my stool
I would sleep with all of you
1) I’m not wearing underwear.
2) I know why he’s really called Jughead
No seriously it’s only a back massager. You try to sit in this seat all day!
1: “The birds and bees are NOT literal!”
2: “Never gonna give you up! Never gonna let you down!”
4: “Class is dismissed until the custodian can clear those wasps out!”
5: “Field trip! Everyone to the Magic School Bus!”
1) people class was dismiss like 4 hours ago get out!
2) alright everybody class is dismiss and don’t forget get to make your own nuclear bombs
“YOU’RE ALL JUST INK ON THE PAGES OF SOME OLD COMIC BOOK! “
“Ahh, whenever I hear the sound of chainsaws I’m reminded of my wedding.”
“Oh, did I mention that today’s lunch will include Soylent Green?”
1. “There’s not enough racial diversity at Riverdale High. You’re all being replaced by visible minorities tomorrow.”
2. “Why are you losers still in my class? You graduated years ago, get a job!”
Shut up or I`ll start talking about sex education!!!!!
“There’s no talking in Fight Class! You’re all expelled!”
1. The first rule of Fight Club: Never talk about Fight Club!
2. Alright, I do like Adam Sandler movies! You happy now, you little pukes?
3. Which one of you is wearing my knickers?
4. Who wants to stay and get weird?
5. Horses and hoops! Balls and bears! Elephants and lions!
Kristen Stewart has been nominated for best actress!
Clooney is the best Batman!
Quiet or I’ll show you pictures of Rosie O’Donnell in a thong!
Jesus was black, 9/11 was a conspiracy, and Ronald Reagan was the devil.
“It’s true, my real name is Jeff and I did create Hero Machine.”
“They do not touch my knees, my dress has padding.”
“Who took my Jeff Hebert Play Girl?”
“Tomorrow you enter the real world.”
“Who did it raise your hand.”
“Class this is me nude.”
“Yes you heard me right, Home Work.”
“We once used books in school.”
“See what happens when you wear you pants to low.”
“Turning your phone to vibrate and using call back will no longer be allowed in class.”
“Sixty years and still in the same grade, really?”
“Buzz, bzz, buzz, buzz. That’s what you all sound like. Someone owes me a new hearing-aid.”
“Class has been over for fifteen minutes. What are you idiots still doing here?”
YES I’M A MAN now leave!
no im not an alien now stop trying to call the men in black
shut up damn bees
does anybody want to go out with me
alright class prepare to see my true form
this is me back in high school (scars the students for life)
students prepare for your enlightenment
god hates #@&$!
fyi thats not a view i support
I used to be a student like you , but then I took……………………………………
STFU ALL YOU BUZZING BEES!!
2) Garfield told Odie to shoot JFK.
3) Dust in the wind. All we are is dust in the wind. Dust in the wind. Everything is dust in the wind.
I don’t believe in Superman, Frankenstein, or Peter Pan
SHUT UP AND GO OUTSIDE YOU IGNORANT RETARDED SON OF THE DEVIL BRATS AND GO OUTSIDE FOR RECESS
the Avengers movie sucked1 (real life response of whomever I say that too)
I’ve secretly been making amateur porn with all your parents for years.
Come in tomorrow, when I reveal which of you gave me the clap!
None of this is real. Me… the classroom… nothing! Wake up!
[Redacted for poor taste. And spelling. — Jeff]
1. Ok so you’re homework tonight is to write a report on everything I just read from this book to you.
2. Everything I just told you guys is on the finals, and I won’t repeat myself, so good luck.
3. No wonder you guys are still in high school!!
Get back to work you lazy drones! I am the queen here!
I started my period today…
I ain’t afraid to shank a bitch
do you have enough vibrators to share with the class?
A dingo ate my baby!
yes I have male genitals
Veronica is a redhead
Jughead is the Valavictorian
You are all going to hell
my feet smell like fish
I hate white people
I rode a pig to work today
My farts whistle
whats a hashtag?
who stole my stash?
I will see you at the club this weekend
I own a sex swing
Archie has no penis
I just sharted
I love cheesy poofs
Unless you behave yourselves, I will spread a rumor to the other students that you all DID behave yourselves.
SHUT UP YOU IGNORANT BORING UGLY RETARDED LITTLE BRATS AND GO HAVE FUN AT RECESS
1. now witch one of you kids did i have a kid with
2. who are these children and how did they get here
3. are all of you my sons and daughters?
4. shut up or i will take your soul
1. Unless you can all say something other than “Buzz Buzz Buzz” get out of my classroom!
2. If I keep hearing how good “Battleship” was, GET OUT OF MY CLASSROOM!!!
3. I just farted
4. I can clearly see that you’re all leaving school in the next panel, so just go.
5. I want all of you out! Except you Jughead, close your eyes.
OK folks, contest is over. I’m putting together the winners’ post now.