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  • in reply to: Vampyrist’s Corner #4257
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    OwenJackson
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    Wow, there’s a lot of good guys. But there’s one problem. The heads are to small. I don’t know one person with such small heads. I know, this is the normal HeroMachine size, but i make the heads a bit bigger, to make them look more real. I don’t know why nobody see this, that they are to small. O.o

    I realy would love to see a character from you with the right headsize.

    in reply to: Owen Jackson’s Fantasy Gallery #4231
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    Well, he isn’t the protagonist, so it should be no problem to tell his story. I write it in both languages.

    Charles Keros is the King of Targos. He was one of the three scholars of the legendary King and Sharii-Warrior Jacob B. Teach.
    He maybe looks like an enemy, but he isn’t.
    When he was young, he was thinkin’ about beauty. He get the mind, that beauty is overrated. I doesn’t matter how he looks, it only matters what he does. So he fight and fight and fight and get a incredible strong aura of Shadora (Magic Energy), the biggest on the world. He walked back to Targos, where he was borned and his parents and siblings was slaughtered by the soldiers of the corrupt King. He attacked this Kingdom alone. And single-handedly he defeated the whole army. While this happen his left eye and ear was cutted, if he hasnt his right ear, the people maybe would doesnt seen that he has elvian blood. His left Faceside was burned. And he got a lot of scars and lost the most of his hair (thats why he shaved it).
    Now he looks like a human devil, but he his a strong and juster King.

    Now in german:

    Charles Keros ist der König von Targos. Er war einer der drei Schüler des legendären Königs und Sharii-Kriegers Jacob B. Teach. Auch wenn er wie ein Bösewicht aussehen mag, so ist er es nicht.
    Als er jung war, dachte er über Schönheit nach. Er kam zur Meinung, dass Schönheit überbewertet sei. Es wäre egal wie er ausschaut, wichtig sei nur wie er handelt. Also kämpfte er immer, immer und immer wieder und bekam eine Aura aus Shadora (magische Energie), welche die stärkste auf der Welt wurde.
    Er ging zurück nach Targos, seiner Heimat, wo seine Eltern und Geschwister von den Soldaten des korrupten Königs ermordet wurden. Er griff das Königreich an, alleine. Im Alleingang vernichtete er die gesamte Armee wurde aber schwer verwundet. Sein linkes Auge und linkes Ohr wurden zerstört. Hätte er sein rechtes Ohr nicht, würd man wohl nicht erkennen dass er elfisches Blut in sich trägt. Seine linke Gesichtshälfte hat eine Brandwunde und er hat viele Narben, ausserdem verlor er sein meistes Haar und rasierte sich danach komplett kahl.
    Nun sieht er aus wie ein menschlicher Teufel, aber ist ein gerechter und starker König.

    Oh yeah, the clothes are in the colours of the flag from Targos. The black bird is the symbol of the country (and is on the flag, too). In my story every king uses the colours of his country.

    in reply to: Owen Jackson’s Fantasy Gallery #4237
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    Thanks. I think i need a while, but i think i will bring more pictures and make the contests, too.

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