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  • #123061
    Disraxar
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    Greetings, HM forums! I am Disraxar. Welcome to my lair! *Evil laughter*

    *Cough cough* Um… Sorry. Something came over me.

    Anyway, I’ve been using the HM program for years, but none of it was worth posting until recently.

    I’ve already read the rules, so don’t worry about that. When I start posting characters, feel free to give me constructive criticism or ideas for my next character. (Note: I mostly make females, so please suggest accordingly.)

    I’ll be posting soon. I’ll start with my mech and my fighter spaceship. I have 2 other characters to post but I need to decide if they  fit the forum rules.

    So… yeah. There ya’ go. Theres me so far.

    #123063
    Disraxar
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    The Je-gun.

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    #123070
    hawk007
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    Nice start. Can’t really think of any criticism.

    #123073
    Disraxar
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    New charecters:

    1: Stang-lor 2000. Just some random fighter.

    2: Skalzana the evil mage and mad scientist. “I’m a mad scientist! My decisions don’t have to make sense!” -Skalzana.

    Another character coming soon!

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    #123083
    Disraxar
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    This one is a crazed serial killer with the temperament of a little girl(Sort of). Probably would come out of a horror story.

    “Don’t be afraid. I just want to play with you!” -Mad Girl

    Well, I’m out of characters worth posting unless you want to see all the bad ones. Any ideas for my next character?

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    #123085
    hawk007
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    The one thing I would say (this applies more to Skalzana) is detail. Maybe add a belt, insignia, tattoo, something just make it look more realistic.

    #123093
    Disraxar
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    Hm…  I bet Skalzana would look better with a belt. I’ll get her new suit out ASAP.

    #123094
    Disraxar
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    Here is Skalzana again. This time with an improved outfit. (Now with a belt and improved color) Thanks to @hawk007 for the suggestion.

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    #123097
    JR19759
    JR19759
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    Nice start, welcome to the forums.

    Obviously you’ve predicted me with the rest of what I usually say, so I won’t say it.

    Looking forward to more from you.

    #123135
    Disraxar
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    Thank you, JR! I knew someone would pester me about it, so I got it out of the way before that.

    This one is Zon. It was an evil, self-aware virus that infected an otherwise good “Killer” Robot. Now he has his own body and has amassed great power, but he doesn’t know what to do with it yet.

    I originally made him for the forum games of the Minecraft Forums, and now I’ve drawn him.

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    #123145
    hawk007
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    Minecraft? Nice.

    #123769
    Disraxar
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    My latest and most detailed character yet. Shame she doesn’t have a back story. In fact, all she has is that image. And a crossbow.

    I only have one character idea left, so feel free to give a suggestion.

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    #124156

    Herr D
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    MMmmmmrmm . . . bow girl’s legs seem slightly mismatched in length. I’m guessing you want their knees about the same height, with a little of the top of a boot showing from her right foot. Look at a couple of walking poses online to see what I mean.

    Backstory suggestion:

    Hyweb walked carefully, avoiding dry sticks. Her bow poised to fire, she reflected on the near murder that happened less than an hour before. She had almost shot the good tree Yunna behind Gwessa. Yunna would surely have bled her lifesap and died in minutes.

    It was hard to tell the difference between the good and bad trees in the moonlight. Gwessa had yanked up her roots and rolled downhill out of range, shattering Yunna’s saplings and leaving Hyweb to console her.

    This hunt was getting personal.

    #124278
    Disraxar
    Disraxar
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    Mismatched? I’ll see what I can do…

    #124279
    Disraxar
    Disraxar
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    Improved version of Bow Girl, who now has a name: Aznaa.

    Story: Kaaxzth had managed to convince the court of Arbon that he was no longer evil. He lied, though. Days after his release he went right back to his old ways: stealing, murder, and other crimes. One day, when he was in the forest, he felt an arrow go threw his leg. He turned around and saw his arch nemesis and sister Aznaa.

    “Couldn’t even wait a year, huh? You are getting worse.” Said Aznaa

    “Please! Join me again! We would be the greatest thieves in Arbon!” Replied Kaaxzth.

    “I am done with a life of crime. I have been for 2 years. My life with you still haunts me…” Said Aznaa “You are wanted dead or alive, Kaaxzth. This is the end for you.”

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