Open Critique Day #40….

Hey gang!  Going scooters at home yet?

Let's get at it.......!

How this goes:  You post a work of yours, finished or WIP, and then I (ams) will give you suggestions or tips on your work.  Just make sure that you only post pictures that are your own design and not any that are copyrighted or based off of copyrighted characters.

Cheers!

8 Responses to Open Critique Day #40….

  1. Rekulhs Nathe Rekulhs Nathe

    Dokkaebi
    https://www.deviantart.com/1ofthem/art/Dokkaebi-839587166
    I wanted to go for a look that made it look like he was wearing a suit that was organic and living.

  2. @ Suleman

    Awesome character pic! Strong foundation and proportions are great.

    Maybe brighten you highlights a little more to add more depth.

    Not much I would change. Well done!

  3. @Rekulhs Nathe

    Challenging concept.

    I see what you are trying to accomplish with the teeth zipper, but I would need more throughout the suit to be convincing that it is something he is wearing. More flaps and folds around the edges? Feet are to plain, maybe more monstrous/demon like? I guess what I’m trying to say is exaggerate more the creature part.

    Colors are ok, but I would choose a cooler color for the background to prevent blending with the main subject.

    Cheers!

  4. Blastmasterism324 Blastmasterism324

    I do have one; mostly I need ideas for her powerset (currently it’s rusting metal), but I’m also open to critique about her look!
    https://www.deviantart.com/blastmasterism324/art/SBW-Glee-785998103

  5. Oops. Forgot to close the day on this post.

    I will throw you a critique for your pic, blastmaster, but after that this segment is closed.

  6. Blastmasterism324 Blastmasterism324

    Ah, thank you.

    Sorry for the late response, haven’t been on all day.

  7. Sorry for the delay, Blast!

    Like the character design and well put together. Pose is balanced and perspective is well done.

    I will suggest to revisit your browns. I would change the cacti and stones to darker shades in order to show more depth and separate from the main figure.

    Are you going for a more anime face structure? Also with the power description, is metal wrist/shin guards a good choice? Probably be switched to more leather items (natural materials).

    Thanks for sharing.