Open Critique Day #H6

Sorry for this being so late. We live in the country and we had a storm last night that knocked out the phone lines. Share what you have to share.

11 Responses to Open Critique Day #H6

  1. Sorry to hear about your power problems. I have had to live through that myself. 4 days without power due to ice forming on the power lines. Thankfully we had a wood heater and oil lamps.

  2. This is one that I shared for the hair contest. I wanted to know what the community thought of her.

    Alari Starr

  3. Here’s a concept superheroine of mine. Thinking of calling her Ultra Lass, perhaps. The other is the same, but with wind blowing.

    http://i1359.photobucket.com/albums/q794/niteridrr/DontWorry_zps5bc327a4.jpg

    http://i1359.photobucket.com/albums/q794/niteridrr/ultra3_zps931d6249.jpg

    Feel free to suggest other names.

  4. I like the over all concept. For me, it is a little too red. Maybe change the shade of red in the cape, or add some shadows to break it up a little.

  5. I forgot that today was Open Critique HK day else I would have posted it for you when I saw your eariler post about phone line troubles! I can certainly understand storm problem after living through the aftermath of Hurricane Sandy a few months ago!!!! Hope things are back to normal at your place now and if not drop me a email or a PM and let me know if there is anything you want me to take care of this week!

  6. My first superhero team:
    Big Red- drawing his sword
    Dixie~ World traveler/ adventurer
    Cy- don’t call me Cyclops
    and finally
    Crimson dark fighter
    they were made individually in HM and combined in Paint!

    http://i1162.photobucket.com/albums/q539/kjell17/My%20Creations/Background2_zpsbe68a661.png

  7. Kaldath:
    I forgot that today was Open Critique HK day else I would have posted it for you when I saw your eariler post about phone line troubles! I can certainly understand storm problem after living through the aftermath of Hurricane Sandy a few months ago!!!! Hope things are back to normal at your place now and if not drop me a email or a PM and let me know if there is anything you want me to take care of this week!

    I’m good, thanks for the offer.

  8. http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/005/7/d/alien_snakeman_by_malfar-d5qhqyy.jpg

    Haven’t participated in what looks like ages, so completely forgot, what I submitted and whaat not. So, take a look at this guy.

  9. @Keith: Alari is pretty. Not sure why she’s holding the weapon at that angle–clearing her dress? Posture for magic?
    @Nite: Ultra would do it. Lass suggests old UK or Ireland to me, but the pic doesn’t.
    @Keric: Good look–does anyone do ranged attacks?

  10. @Malfar: I think the elbows stick out too far for the shoulder pad extensions. Otherwise, he’s great.
    @Dionne Jinn: Not Obsessive Compulsive Disorder–Obviously Complicated Design . . . I like. The only thing you could likely do without is the stonework wall. Since dwarves ‘normally’ carve their walls out of solid rock, it could maybe be a solid gray with a few artful cracks. Otherwise you NEEDED all that stuff.