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The Atomic Punk
THE RONIN’S REVENGE
Original Character by WMDBASSPLAYER; Story by The Atomic Punk
“Hey, Pietro, you hear about Frank and Brenna? They were ambushed by a demon and a satyr the other day. They barely made it out alive. These are some dangerous woods.
“We need to stay alert. Dorrick the Dismemberer is hiding around here. That sadistic psycho mutilates and murders for fun. He is quiet as a worm tunneling under your feet.
“I almost had him once. He snuck up on me on this same bridge. Holding on to the rail gave him enough leverage to take my arm in one swing. If it weren’t for Heinz pushing Dorrick into the river, I would be dead. No one has seen Heinz since. So I have returned to avenge Heinz and myself.
“Pietro? You’re being awful quiet back there. No matter. There’s no sign of Dorrick. Let’s go back to the temple.â€