Reply To: Disraxar's lair

[Herr D]

MMmmmmrmm . . . bow girl’s legs seem slightly mismatched in length. I’m guessing you want their knees about the same height, with a little of the top of a boot showing from her right foot. Look at a couple of walking poses online to see what I mean.

Backstory suggestion:

Hyweb walked carefully, avoiding dry sticks. Her bow poised to fire, she reflected on the near murder that happened less than an hour before. She had almost shot the good tree Yunna behind Gwessa. Yunna would surely have bled her lifesap and died in minutes.

It was hard to tell the difference between the good and bad trees in the moonlight. Gwessa had yanked up her roots and rolled downhill out of range, shattering Yunna’s saplings and leaving Hyweb to console her.

This hunt was getting personal.