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  • #130713
    Candruth
    Candruth
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    Malai:

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    #130721

    Nug
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    I’m so glad you’re back! Thanks for this!

    #130722
    Candruth
    Candruth
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    You’re very welcome! I can’t promise I’ll be around a whole lot since I’m about to start NaNoWriMo, but I’ll try. xD

    #130741
    Candruth
    Candruth
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    Lancer:

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    #130746
    hawk007
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    Those two last characters are already two of my favorite on here. The costume, posing, shading. Everything’s amazing!

    #130750
    Candruth
    Candruth
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    Thanks! I personally think seeing these two characters fight would be the coolest thing ever.

    I tried taking a page from AMS’s book with the posing– good to hear it was effective. 😀

     

    #130815
    Candruth
    Candruth
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    Arctic Archer:

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    #130820
    ams
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    WOW!  Very dynamic posing!  Your colors and highlighting are excellent.  Love the splash of orange as your third color option.  It really draws the eye to the action.

    Some things that are a little off.  Sorry. Since you have now justified yourself as a world class ‘machiner, I will be uping my critiquing and expect the same if you were looking at anything of mine.

    First the bow.  The arrow and bowstring are perfect, but there is no flex in the bow.  With the string drawn back, there would be more arch to the bow from the pressure.

    The bent knee.  You are missing the outline at the bend.  Try using a black insignia shape and tuck behind the knee to ad outline.

    The right hand is smaller than the left.  Should be the opposite since the right hand is closer to the viewer.

    And last but not least, please try and use a snipping tool to get the whole image and not have the bow cut off.

    I know with the amount of time you have spent on this, that your first response at me would be to flip me the bird.  But I can see you like to push the envelope with your ‘machining and the tips might be helpful with some of your future outstanding concepts.

     

    Cheers!

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    #130825
    Candruth
    Candruth
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    @ams I totally appreciate the time you took to critique this, thanks. Your points are all completely valid and you’re pretty much an authority on this kind of stuff. 😀

    I thought I was pretty thorough about this pose since I originally had the wrong leg up and the arrow on the near side of the bow. Glad I at least caught those ones. xD

     

    #130834

    DiCicatriz
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    Combining the loose straps/buckles with the cloth boots is brilliant. Totally using (stealing) that in the future. Beautiful shading on that scarf too.

    #130835

    Nug
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    “I thought I was pretty thorough about this pose since I originally had the wrong leg up and the arrow on the near side of the bow. Glad I at least caught those ones. xD”

    Me too about the thorough… Except for the bow bend…I didn’t notice those things.  However… I did notice the arrow… A lot of people shoot with the arrow on the outs. It’s  a more efficient style of shooting.  I cant do it! I have to do it like you have depicted, but either way would have been cool.

     

    #130849
    Candruth
    Candruth
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    Arctic Archer, Round 2:

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    #130870
    hawk007
    hawk007
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    Congrats on being on Malai being in the Hall of Fame. Not sure if you have been before (wouldn’t doubt it), but the character was really awesome.

    #130871
    Candruth
    Candruth
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    Congrats on being on Malai being in the Hall of Fame. Not sure if you have been before (wouldn’t doubt it), but the character was really awesome.

    Thanks so much! It is indeed my first time, and I’m super happy! 😀

    #130887

    Nug
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    So cool you getting into the Hall of Fame! Congratulations!! Can’t wait for that day myself.

    To quote AMS: “world class ‘machiner” 😉

     

    Just realized I coded all over this post. Sorry I cleaned it up!

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