Open Critique Day #31

How this goes:  You post a work of yours, finished or WIP, and then others give you critiques on your work. I do not mind if you post non-HM pictures or piece of writing. Just make sure that you only post pictures that are your own design and not any that are copyrighted or based off of copyrighted characters.

Even this is called Open Critique Day, I allow (even encourage!) for you guys to post and discuss on this for the weekend until 11:59 pm Sunday.

14 Responses to Open Critique Day #31

  1. @EW44; That looks good! You may want to mask another tattoo similar to the current one to the eye.

  2. The basic design is good, but I don’t really think the orange and the pink work very well together. I would suggest choosing either a warmer shade of red for the stains or a colder shade for the armour.

    I also think you could go way farther with the facial scar tissue. Play around with the the items in Head – MaleFace section, they are great for that sort of thing.

  3. @EW44: I would resize or adjust the shoulder armor

  4. I Would Darken The Armor

  5. @ TheCrimsonGuy

    Cool! I really dig the design.

    Minor nitpicks: One of the straps to his left vambrace just kinda ends in the middle of the his arm. Maybe you could use an insignia item to extend it a little. You also might want to put some more time into the shading; unshaded items can look oddly flat when other parts of the image is shaded. Also the belts at his hip probably wouldn’t hang upwards like that if he’s hanging upside-down.

    Again, though, these are just minor stuff, overall it’s a solid piece of art.

  6. @ Stulte

    Thanks for the tips

  7. The High Demon in a cool suit!

  8. Here’s the link: http://i1383.photobucket.com/albums/ah307/Dreadyacht/The%20High%20Demon…In%20A%20Suit_zpss8ks3iwy.png I forgot to put it in the previous one