Open Critique Day #10

Alright, guys! It's time for another Open Critique Day!

As for how this goes, you post a work of yours, finished or WIP (aka work in process, for those who are new to abbreviations), and then others give you critiques on your work.  I do not mind if you post the occasional non-HM picture or piece of writing, but keep in mind that, though there are some, not all of us here are writers or do art outside of HeroMachine. All I ask is that you only post pictures that are your own design and not any that copyrighted or based off of copyrighted characters. As for pieces of writing, I’m not sure about whether fan fiction is allowed, but for right now, just in case, don’t post fan fiction either.

Also, again, if you post a work, it is highly recommended that you also give someone else a critique.

2 Responses to Open Critique Day #10

  1. Demoninthenight

    Here is one I did during Halloween. Hope you enjoy.
    http://i846.photobucket.com/albums/ab27/Demoninthenight/clown3_zps9ce77d63.png

  2. @Demoninthenight: That looks good. Only real nitpick I have is that the girl in that picture is wearing a shirt that indicates that’s she’s, um…well-built on top, but she doesn’t really have the cleavage to show for it.