Character Contest 24: Super enemies

After a two week break for the holidays, it's time once again for a character design contest!

Only this time, your challenge is to develop a bad guy! Come up with the best enemy for an established character, explaining who the person is and how they're related to the main character, and you'll win either a portrait or any item you like to be included in HeroMachine 3.

As an example, you might come up with a new Bulletman villain named "Kevlar" (he stops bullets!). Or a Spider-Man villain named "The Boot" (see, he squishes spiders).

You get the idea. The villain you come up with should be tied to a published super-hero in some way.

To recap, the rules are:

  • All entries must be posted as a comment to this post, including a link to an image of the character on a publicly accessible web site (something like PhotoBucket or ImageShack or the UGO Forums) along with a name and explanation of who his arch rival is;
  • As many entries as you want, but they can't have been entered into an HM contest before;
  • No image editing in PhotoShop-like applications except for basic cropping.

All submissions are due by next Monday night at midnight, with results posted on Tuesday.

Good luck everyone!

87 Responses to Character Contest 24: Super enemies

  1. John says:

    Oooo…good contest! Looking forward to this one!

  2. Demented The Clown says:

    I Should Really Enter This One, Been Awhile.

  3. JR says:

    ok this elyktrolysis ( a process that splits atoms)the enemy of The Atom!

    she has the ability to manipulate the laws and forces of both physics and nuclear physics. her most powerful power is her deatomizing powers! MUHAHAHAHAAAHAAA! 😀

  4. Hammerknight says:

    @Hero of wu, who is the Hero that your Villain is super enemies way. To quote Jeff,”Come up with the best enemy for an established character”.

  5. Connor S. says:

    Somebody should do something against Spidey, cuz I’m tired of his below average enemies. I would, but I’m too stupid to figure out how to enter.

  6. Demented The Clown says:

    @Connor S. Entering is easy, screen capture your work, upload it to photobucket, tinypic, or what ever. Then post the link (not the embedded link). n Taa Daa projector phone.

  7. Gero says:

    For my first entry, I decided to take the idea of the Superman villian Metallo and expand upon it. Imagine if instead of having to fight an enemy with just a heart made of Kryptonite, Supes went head to head with a being MADE of it? Will the Man of Steel be a match for (dramatic pause) Krypto Knight?!?

  8. Demented The Clown says:

    I Present You With Captain Americas Fiercest Enemy.


  9. MartianBlue says:

    I created this guy the other day, with noone inparticular in mind. He’s a mercenary, neither good nor bad, but I think he could fit this contest.

    Captain America enter Major Havok

    MH Green
    Captain America was always this young man’s hero, and the reason he joined the army in the first place. The young man advanced through rank pretty quickly, reaching seargent major. During a mission, he was seriously wounded, along with his squad, losing his memory, and right arm. Being placed in intensive care along with his unit they were marked as MIA. Most died, but the few who didn’t, were trained as a special tactics mercenary force known as Raven Squad.

    MH Black
    After being brainwashed by The Red Skull, Major Havok, believed himself to be a German Nazi, who was loyal only to his “country”. Viewing Captain America as the German nation’s greatest threat he went on a personal mission to eliminate Captain America, no matter the cost.

  10. Steve M. says:

    Lord Menace – A sorcerer that has grafted both an angel’s heart and a demon’s heart into his body, gaining their power, and hiding himself from both Heaven and Hell. Fights against Doctor Voodoo.

  11. The Imp says:

    In a parallel dimension, the US goverment’s super soldier program had two test subjects – Steve Rogers, and Mark Stone. Stone, however, was a Nazi spy and sleeper agent. Both men were administered the serum and gained identical powers.

    Stone eventually tried to eliminate Rogers and the rest of the super soldier program. He killed the scientists in charge when they wouldn’t turn over their research (the key elements of which they’d memorized) so that America couldn’t develop any more soldiers, then fled to Germany.

    There, he took on the identity of Supersoldat (Super Soldier) and battled Captain America througout World War Two. The two were frozen in the Arctic during the last days of the war and thawed out decades later…

    Super Soldier:

  12. Vampyrist says:

    Bulletman has finally met his match. The villain Kevlar, who has diamond hard skin and immense superstrength, is gunning for the hero. His reasons are unknown, but it’s speculated that Bulletman gave him this kevlar state.

  13. Gene says:

    Dr. John Chase was a biochemist and geneticist working on variants of the Super Soldier serum – a serum that would give specific traits; one for strength, one for speed, one for super hearing, etc. The Goal being to be able to costume create a soldier with a specific set of abilities.

    He was killed in his lab when Spider man tussled with the Sinister 6, destroying the building he was working in. (Yeah, that’s right. I said ‘Tussled’…what of it??)

    His Daughter, Cassandra Chase held Spiderman Personally responsible and took up his notes to design a serum that would give her super human abilities; Strength, speed, health, and enhanced senses. She designed a costume that would mimic Spiderman’s wall crawling ability and web shooting, and a cloak that would allow her to blend into the shadows. She trained in the martial arts, acrobatics, and gymnastics and took on the persona of Arachnophobia, and went after our friendly Neighborhood Spiderman.

  14. Rozenstal says:
    Hunter – Wolverine`s enemy (hunters hunt on wolverins).
    For a long time searches for Wolverine what to settle accounts with it for former insults. Hobby – hunting for any living creatures, a collecting of skins and scalps. Terrible scar on his face – result of its last meeting with a Wolverine.

  15. Al says:

    Once, during a fight between Green Lantern and Sinestro, a gate to a parallel universe. In this universe, the Green Lantern Corps did not exist. Instead, there was only the Negative Lantern Corps, a massive criminal organization powered by the infinite energy of dark matter. Although they appear to be similar to the Black Lantern Corps of the Green Lantern’s universe, they were much more powerful. Their power rings were able to completely nullify the energy coming from any other rings, completely rendering them useless. Now, Hal Jordan must fight off their most vicious member. Does he have a chance against the dark that consumes the light? Does he have a chance against…Blackout?(dun dun dunnnnnnnnnnnnnnn)

  16. remy says:

    You may remember this hero, Stingray. He’s Marvel’s aquatic superhero.

    My villain for him is his natural enemy…the shark! He’s one of those laughing-stock-of-the-underworld guys. He’s incredibly cliche. Some evil scientists made his suit for him. The suit has an incredibly long air supply, and great strength/speed while in water. To make him more shark-like, the suit enables him to smell blood from a great distance away. (They put in that, but didn’t program the fear of dolphins! Oh well.) Here he is…

    looking back, I see that it is pretty obvious that it was 3 am when I made all of this up…

  17. Hero of wu says:

    I will post this again, The commander lives in a robotic suit that gives him both life and power. His suit can realise certain energy fields that interrupt electrical signals. I place him against Iron Man, his energy field making Iron Man’s suit useless.

  18. Steve says:

    Super-villain: the Red Tiger.
    Enemy of: Spiderman
    Real Name: Mary Jane Watson
    Powers: Enhanced speed, reflexes, strength and capable of using her “Tiger Claw” with deadly efficiency.

    In some parallel alternate future, Mary Jane marries Peter, though does NOT know that he is Spiderman, and she become pregnant. Unfortunately, she is in an accident on the train because of a fight between Spiderman and the Green Goblin (Harry Osborn, not Norman) , which causes her to have a miscarriage. Upon realizing this, both Peter AND Harry, whom are both in love with Mary, rush to her side and reveal themselves and apologize. Through the shock of losing her baby and realizing that her husband and their best friend were not only arch-enemies, but responsible for the miscarriage, Mary Jane snapped. She secretely met with Mistress Doom (Susan Storm) to gain powers of her own, to gain retribution for her lost child. She now makes it a personal vendetta to ruin her husband and the Green Goblin, and anyone else who dares to get in her way. Unfortunately, after she killed Harry, she realized that she enjoyed being evil, and broadened her horizons, teamin up with bigger and badder villains, though remaining fiercely loyal to Doom and her Fiendish Five, and never losing sight of her true goal….The DEATH of Spiderman.

  19. The Imp says:

    Early in Garth Ennis’s run on Punisher, he introduced some copycat vigilantes. One of them was a priest who was basically a serial killer. I always thought it was a shame that Ennis killed him off; I thought the idea of an even-worse version of Frank Castle, but one who was completely convinced he was an agent of God, would be pretty scary. So here’s that concept, called ‘Paladin’.

  20. Vampyrist says:

    Gregory Pierce was a low-level thug who was always being taken down by spider-man. He decided to beat him he had to be like him. Lucky for him Kingpin wanted a super-villain to take Spider-man out. He hired a scientist who synthesized a spider formula and injected it into Greg. His body mutated and he grew 6 spidery legs. He could generate a super-strong webbing that matched Spider-man’s. He took the name Spider-web and started to spin a trap for the young Spiderman.

  21. kyle says:

    Enemy of:superman,raven,
    she is mysterious,a twin sister of raven.
    Pandora and raven fought with each other in the underworld
    raven accidentally opened a portal to the mortal world.
    Pandora enter the portal and when she got their she started creating chaos. raven knew she can’t defeat her so she asked for help by the justice league.they too couldn’t stop her. superman thought he knew how defeat the vein.
    acting all cocky like, he dive while firing heat beams form his eyes. she turned them to snow. he missed her by an inch she grabbed his cape and made him disappear,
    and the world was doomed.

  22. Vaxx says:

    Hi jeff, this is my entry for character contest 24: super enemies.

    Max Murloc the Modern Kineticist

    Arch-nemesis of Doctor Strange,
    he has some magical powers, right?
    Wrong. he can absorb magical energy
    and turn it into physical energy.
    (speed, strength, energy (the kind you
    would get from an energy drink) etc.)

  23. Demented The Clown says:

    The Flash Has Met His Match.


  24. The Imp says:

    This is Megiddo, the half-human son of Darkseid. When his pops was killed by the Justice League, Megiddo vowed vengeance on them all…

  25. The Doomed Pixel says:

    The Mime (Buster Criss) is a semi-dangerous villain with some serious potential which he, fortunately, has not tapped into at present. Currently the arch-nemesis of former X-Man Shadowcat (Kitty Pryde), Mime boasts the unique power to create invisible, unbreakable fields of kinetic energy that he can manipulate into objects such as walls, ropes, and mallets. What is particularly unusual about Mime’s energy fields is that they seem to exist on almost all known planes and levels of reality, in such a way that nobody can phase or teleport through them. For this reason, he hunts those who render themselves intangible or who are known to sport teleportation abilities, and has done away with several of these mutants before moving on to Shadowcat. A photographic rendering can be retrieved below:

  26. SongBird2103 says:

    Would it be too much to ask if we use photoshop to add thought bubbles and text? If I add anything else at this point, I have a feeling HM3 will crash and I’ll lose my work.

  27. Golden Eagle says:

    Dark Kryptonite is enemy for Superman.He hated Superman s he was the reason for making him caught and put in prison for years,but Lex luthor used his hate for superman and helped him have superpowers using kryptonite…

  28. kyle says:

    You may remember this hero: vigilante 1:

    abilities:expert motorcycle/horse rider,skilled with a pistol,a double barrel shotgun,riffle and very perceive
    real name unknown

    Super-villain:mad dog
    Enemy:wild cat
    abilities:master athlete,

  29. Jeff Hebert says:

    Yes, I think using PhotoShop for bubbles and text would be too much. I do plan on adding those at some point to the app, but until then unfortunately I think they’re out unless you can figure out a way to jury-rig them into the character (which some people have done, though I am not sure how — I think through judicious use of insigna put in all white).

  30. Jeff Hebert says:

    Make sure you use Save and also export as a JPG or PNG first, SongBird, and then if it crashes, put the captions in the comment when you submit the character.

  31. gero says:

    I always use the circle in the insignia catagory, just stretched into an oval, and with either smaller circles (thoughts) or a triangle (speech) connecting it to the character…

  32. SongBird2103 says:

    I mean, I know how to make thought bubbles. The problem was, because I actually made a convincing Spiderman clone, I really overused the spiderweb pattern and HM3 began to slow up, which is usually a sign I get before the program crashes.

    Anyways, I was rushed off of the computer, so I printscreened it without thought an hour or two ago and saved it as a BMP file. I’ll add what the dialog should have been, so hopefully you can get an idea of what’s going on in the picture.


  33. SongBird2103 says:

    *without thought bubbles

  34. gero says:

    That’s why I save the character after every four or five items, just in case…

  35. gero says:

    My second character could be either a villain of DC or Marvel, as both have characters that use super powered suits (Iron Man, War Machine, Steel, that guy in the white robot from DC, etc). Pulse is able to create EMPs from the generator on his chest, and fire them from his hands, rendering all electronics he hits useless. He can also fire electricity from his body, and has super-human strength

  36. SongBird2103 says:

    Real Name: Brenda McCartney

    Villain Name: Entangle

    Enemy: Peter Parker AKA Spiderman

    Powers: none

    Weapons: Two gauntlets that allows the wearer to force emotions into other people’s heads

    Short bio:
    “Look at that Mary Jane! She thinks she’s soooooo hot and soooo lucky to have Peter all to herself. She’s not worthy of him.” Brenda stared down the hall from Peter and MJ, watching as the redhead flirted with him in front of everyone. The only one that bothered to stop and notice was Brenda, who had been obssessed with Peter ever since she found out about him being the amazing Spiderman, her longtime hero and crush. She had to have him for herself.

    “There’s got to be some way to get him to notice me,…to get him to LOVE me!” For Brenda, there most certainly was. Being quite the genius, she built two gauntlets with the ability to transfer one person’s thoughts and feelings to another. Donning a makeshift costume, she took out into the night as the supervillain “Entangle”. Her only mission was to get as close to Spiderman as she possibly could. Then, when the opportunity presented itself, she’d have him in her clutches, allowing her to slip inside of his heart.

    Her first encounter with Spiderman:

    Spiderman: (thought bubble)-WTH??????
    Entangle: (dialog bubble)-The things I’d do for love…

  37. The Imp says:

    Aquaria is a former girlfriend of Johnny Storm. After they broke up, she became insanely jealous. This extreme emotional state triggered a previously dormant mutant gene which gave her the ability to transform into and create water so cold that it can literally freeze flame solid. She’s a major enemy of the Human Torch.

  38. Gene says:

    This entry is from my son 🙂

    His name is Dr. Ark. His powers are water breathing, control animals, genetic manipulation, Psychic, and Sonar.

    Dr. Ark was researching techniques to genetically manipulate creatures so they could live underwater. His lab was destroyed, accidentally, by Aquaman. The resulting explosion gave Ark his powers. He litters the seas with his creations, and searches for Aquaman to exact his vengeance.

  39. Tango says:

    Name: Scoopy the Clown

    Bio: As the Joker grew in notoriety, clowns were no longer trusted in Gotham City. When Scoopy lost his job as the driver of a popular ice cream truck, thanks to an incident in which he was wrongly accused of being one of the Joker’s henchmen, he entered a spiraling depression, culminating in the divorce of his wife, and the loss of his own children. He snapped soon after, wanting revenge for the loss of his family, and the job he loved. Dressing up in his old outfit, and a utility belt of tools and weapons, he set out to take his revenge by killing the one person who mattered to the Joker more than anything else: Batman.


  40. rancid says:

    doctor neandertron enemy of superman. brains and brawn all in one fendish foe.

  41. D says:

    Another of Iron Man’s armoured foes, seen here with repair bots:

    Alter Ego: Sean O’Brien

    Powers: None

    O’Brien is an Irish-American billionaire weapons manufacturer. As far as he’s concerned, the town ain’t big enough for War Machine, Iron Man, Whiplash and himself, so he aims to narrow down the competition, starting with the man he feels has betrayed not only the industry, but also his country. Namely Tony Stark.

  42. D says:

    Oh yeah, I forgot to mention that his codename’s Gunslinger, so called because of his love for Westerns.

  43. TopHat says:

    Second entry for the contest: The Black Bullet, a robot designed to kill Bulletman. And with an army of NINJA TANKS at his disposal, you better believe it’s far from impossible.

  44. DJ says:

    It’s been a while since I joined in on one of these “reindeer” games. I want to say that I have not read the comic my character is based off of so if it’s been handled in the story. Oops.

    The secret daughter of Santa Clause and Jack Frost’s wife, Alisa had a troubled childhood. She grew up in the Claus home until she was 12 but Mrs.Clause never truly loved her because she was a constant reminder of Santa’s infidelity.

    One day, while she was playing at the island of Misfit Toys a mysterious figure showed up in the North Pole and slaughtered her father. Seeing this ,and fearing for her life if she was to ever return to Santa’s workshop, Alisa fled and traveled the North Pole.

    On one of her journeys she stumbled across an old woman. The woman, Jack Frost’s ex-wife, was shocked to find her daughter in the middle of the North Poles most dangerous region. She took the girl with her back to her cabin and began to teach her the ancient art of Snow Magic.

    It was when she turned 18 she decided she would hunt down the man responsible for her fathers death and kill him. She packed her bags and left to hunt for the man known only as Lobo.

  45. Vaxx says:

    Hey D. Not to be the dick to point it out, but you pretty much made Tony Stark Irish american.

  46. The Imp says:

    Honey Golden is Tony Stark’s new secretary, taking over after Pepper Pots’ tragic fall into a vat of acid. Unbeknownst to Tony (but knownst to us), is the fact that Honey is really a highly advanced robot sent by Stark International’s competition to spy on him and commit industrial sabotage…

  47. Danny Beaty says:

    My entries are the enemies of some of the old Archie Comics superheroes.

    The Iron Cross, enemy of the Shield. The Iron Cross uses an inpenetrable shield and a sword that can cut through anything.

    Winterkill, enemy of the Black Hood. Winterkill can extract
    moisture from the air and turn it into ice, which he uses as a weapon with which to blast his enemies.

    The Incinerator, enemy of the Web. Incinerator uses fire as a weapon.

    Helligator, enemy of the Fox.

  48. Danny Beaty says:

    Countess Chronica von Payne, enemy of Black Jack. Payne can mentally dominate men and make them do her bidding.

  49. LargeFormat says:

    I think I’ll enter…the Super-Kader! (Super Squad)

    Consisting of Surrogate, Flammenwerfer, and Rakete, this genetically and technologically augmented squad devestates the work of Captain America and constantly interrupt his “work”. Proudly bearing the Swastika and Iron Cross as their team symbols, they vow to destroy Captain America himself.




  50. Vampyrist says:

    Cassandra Bellanova was a girlfriend of Tony Stark. One day while walking around Tony’s house she discovered an armor cache. She took pieces of armor to surprise him and to help him fighting criminals. While stealing pieces she became ever more secretive and sneaky. These traits eventually got her dumped. Out of spite she didn’t tell him about the armor. The next time Tony went out as Iron man somebody was waiting. Iron Maiden was there to kill Iron man. As they say Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned

  51. DJ says:

    Question for Jeff: Shouldn’t we avoid creating copies of Copyrighted characters even if it’s part of a “scene” so to speak?

  52. Jeff Hebert says:

    @DJ: That would probably be wise, yes.

  53. The Imp says:

    @Danny Beaty: that is disturbing on so many levels…


  54. D says:

    @ Vaxx: No, I didn’t. The “country” I’m referring to is the US, Sean’s adopted home. Sean feels that Tony betrayed America by deciding to stop manufacturing weapons. It may have been implied, but it’s not what I meant.

  55. MartianBlue says:

    Superman Vs Gentleman Suave

    An alternate reality Superman

  56. MartianBlue says:

    Superman VS Gentleman Suave

    An alternate version of Superman.
    Something screwed up with the first post, on my part.

  57. kyle says:

    Villain Name: eagle woman

    Enemy: owl-woman

    power:master at flight,projects eagle claws.

  58. Hero of wu says:

    Former research scientist for Wayne enterprises, Dr Harold Simms was fired after hacking into Bruce Wayne’s private computer. He was caught before he could steal anything of real importance but he did discover designs for a bat suit. To get his revenge he created his own suit and called himself the Black Samurai.

  59. Brons says:

    Nighthawk is the agent on earth of the Egyptian war god, Monthu, jealous older sibling of Konshu. Once the mortal mercenary known as Rick Cord, Nighthawk was burned to death in the desert south of Luxor in Egypt and was found by nomads who still worship Menthu-Ra. They took him to a hidden temple where he was resurrected and empowered by the ancient falcon-headed war god, Monthu, the older brother of Konshu, whom he deeply resents for eclipsing him. Cord, having been been brought back to life before he was fully healed, was driven somewhat mad. Even though his body is full restored his costume reflects his first view of his reanimated self, a shroud covered blackened corpse.

    His mission now is to destroy Moon Knight.

    Villain: Nighthawk, the Dagger of Monthu
    Secret Identity: Mr. Rick Cord
    Enemy: Moon Knight


  60. Gero says:

    @Imp: Nice Spaceballs reference in the Honey Golden entry!

  61. The Imp says:

    @Martian Blue: How did you make that pop-collar? That is pretty neat…

    @Gero: I wondered if anyone would get that. 😀

  62. Danny Beaty says:

    Here’s how my villains relate to their respective crime-fighter:

    Eric Mueller (a powerful leader in the Neo-Nazi movement) is a descendant of the Son of the Hun, an enemy of the original Shield. Mueller hopes to inspire his minions by killing the present Shield. Spending a considerable amount of money, Mueller tracks down and takes possession of the sword and shield of Sigerd (known to us as “Sigfried). Having been dowsed in the blood of the dragon killed by Sigfried, the weapons now have magical powers: the shield is inpenetratable; the sword can cut through anything. Mueller realizes something is still missing. “The Shield has his costume, so I shall have mine!” Proudly wearing his new costume and armed with his sword, shield, Luger, and boot knife, he hunts for the Shield in the guise of the Iron Cross.

    Crimelords in a meeting are discussing the elimination of the Black Hood. Suddenly, the thugs notice ice forming on the wall, which bursts open when a blue and white figure comes throughy the wall. Before the thugs can fire their guns, the intruder says “You want to ice the Black Hood, then I’m your man. Call me Winterkill!”

    “This suit will allow you to create and project fire, just as you requested,” said the inventor. The customer looked at the suit and said “Good. In no time at all, the Web will be ashes!” The inventor, counting his payment, said “If you don’t mind me asking, why do you hate the Web?” “I hate him” responded the customer “because he’s the one that caught me and left me for the police to find! You know what the real kicker is, my inventive friend?” “No,” said the inventor. “What is the real kicker?” The customer, still looking at the suit, said “If I’m right, the Web is John Raymond…my brother.”

    Photojournalist Paul Patton (aka the Fox) travles to the Louisianna bayou to interview Professor Arnold Langley, a geneticist who claims to have made a startling breakthrough in genetic hybrdization. Upon arrival, Paul is shocked to find Langley’s lab wrecked, as though a maniac had been let loose. Suddenly, the door to a backroom is smashed down by a monstrous alligator/human hybrid. The Fox evades the creature’s scaly grasp and sprays it with knockout gas. Binding the unconscious monster, the Fox then plays a dvd still in the player. Wathcing the dvd, the Fox sees Langley inject himself with some type of serum, fall to the floor, and transform into the hellish mutation that just attacked him. Unbeknownst to the Fox, the Helligator has just awakened…

    Cynthia Pearson discovered at an early that she could mentally control men. She becomes a dominatrix and (because her clients are wealthy men that give her money when she demands it) buys herself a title and changes her name. Now known as Countess Chronica von Payne, she takes over the male-dominated world of crime, swearing to either control or kill the crime-fighter known as Black Jack. Can Black Jack, a man with a will of iron, resist the twisted commands of von Payne?

  63. MartianBlue says:

    Post #63 Replacement

    Gentleman Supreme vs Superman

    Evil Alternate Reality Superman

  64. MartianBlue says:

    @Imp, thanks, actually it was pretty simple.

    OUTLINE – Two Squares(sides) / One Moon(top)

    BACKGROUND – One Square(fill in)

    SOLIDS – Two Squares(inside line — sides) / One Moon(inside line — top) / One circle(Shadow — Head)

    If you want me to be more specific just let me know.

  65. LargeFormat says:

    Got another entry, and probably the last for this one: Mediziner, enemy of Black Widow/Daredevil. Not only is Mediziner capable of healing lacerations, but she also possesses greatly enhanced agility, flexibility, strength, and can imbue those claws of hers with different types of poisons.

  66. Aaron says:

    Martian Hunter:
    Schizophrenic Jack Jackson believed that he was ubducted by martians when he was 12. He vowed that one day he would get vengence on the entire martian planet for what had happened to him. When he learned of the Martian Manhunter and how he was the last martian in exsistance….he knew that it was his responsibility to kill him. Using his inhertence from his dead rich parents he built a suit that allowed him to mimic the Martian Manhunters powers while simultaniously negating 2 random powers of the Manhunters. Due to his schizophrenic nature he often fights hallucinations of the Manhunter causing mass distruction.

  67. Aaron says:

    John Byzantine:
    John Constantine has always wanted redemption for his life of sin. He has fought evil for years hoping that when he dies he will be allowed access into heaven. Knowing that his time on the planet is short he goes to a powerful Sin eater. Knowing that he still has plenty of fight in him still, he none-the-less asks the sin eater to still use his magic on him to take away his remaining sin. Doubtful it would work, but wanting to help a friend the sin eater agrees to attempt to try. The sin eater managed to get all sin out of John, but instead of it being destroyed, it formed into a demonic version of John Constantine, refering to itself as John Byzantine. It has every memory and skill of Constantine, but instead of looking for redemption and to help people, it looks to cause sine around him and kill anyone who gets in his way.

  68. Aaron says:

    Superhuman Strength, Superhuman Speed
    Superhuman Hearing
    Red Solar Energy Blasts

    One day when Superman was on a mission in space with JLA, Lex Lithor kidnapped and torchered his wife Lois Lane. He warped her mind making her think that Superman had abandoned her and earth. After months of torcher, she finally succumed and found Superman to be the most evil being on earth. She allowed Lex Luthor to bond Kryptonian and Martian genes into her DNA. With her new powers and a costume that generated red solar blasts from her hands, Lex Luthor used her not only as a weopon to physically withstand Superman, but one that would effect him psychologically. When Superman returned to earth, he was devistated to find what had happened to Lois. After months of fighting and trying to reverse her brainwashing, he fell into a depression that finally allowed Lois the uperhand to kill her once husband, ridding the world of Superman.

  69. kyle says:

    super villain: J.R
    powers same as hellboy
    reason: hates his dad.

  70. Hammerknight says:

    The Flying Fox
    The Flying Fox (Anthony Cross)has sworn to bring an end to Batman. As a young boy, he dreamed of being just like Batman when he grew up. That is until the day that he lost his parents. The Joker was on the lose again on Gotham’s streets and out for blood. Anthony and his parents were eating at their favorite restaurant when the Joker busted through the door. He was there to kill an informant at ratted on him, and he didn’t care who else was hurt when he did so. A bomb flew through the air and Anthony’s parents knocked him to the floor and covered him with their own bodies. After the explosion Anthony was uncovered by the paramedics, his parents gave their lives to save him. He looked up to see Batman standing in the corner, he ran up to Batman screaming, “Where were you? Why weren’t you here to save them? I hate you! I wish it was you instead of them, you need to die.” From that day on Anthony hate for Batman grew into a passion, all he could think of was how he could kill Batman for not being there to save his parents.

    I don’t usually post stories on the contest but I like the story I made for him and wanted to share.

  71. Aaron says:

    Dark Guardians:
    Powers:Superhuman intelligence,
    Energy Manipulation,

    The Guardians of the Universe were always the ones who tried to keep the universe in order through their peace keeping force the Green Lantern Corps…stating that they cannot be involved in matters themselves. This is a lie. Along the line a group of the Guardians felt that they no longer wanted to protect the universe but rather control it. They used there knowledge of science to add on cybernetic arms to give them additional strength and evenntually changed their appearance to have the demonic legs that earthlings often saw in their myth and bibical imagery. In an act of their stratagy they created the prophecy and were the driving force from a far in the creation of every Lantern Corps that wasn’t Green or Blue. Without any of their servants knowledge the Guardians of the Universe have been fighting these Dark Guardians, even expelling Ganthet and Sayd from their numbers so they could create the Blue Lantern Corps in order to aid the Green Lanterns in their fight against all the different Corps the came from the rest of the emotional spectrum. The Dark Guardians do everything in their power to take control of the Universe by fueling the powers of all the evil corps, even being the real creators of the yellow Qwardian rings used by the Sinestro Corps.

  72. mercwithamouth2 says:

    The head of the Thule socity of the Nazi’s
    Baron Lukas von Teufel, the Iron Cross
    enemy of Captain America and Shield

  73. MartianBlue says:

    @rancid, major pains link is dead

  74. MartianBlue says:

    @kyle J.R.’s link is forbidden

  75. rancid says:

    i put another one up

  76. kyle says:

    let me try this again
    super villain: J.R
    powers same as hellboy
    reason: hates his dad.

  77. kyle says:


    background: wonder woman ex:girlfriend/lover

    mistress of pleasure and mistress of pain: