Open Critique Day #27

Here it is OCD. Another day to show us what you have been working on, and to hear what we have to say about it. I hope that everyone is having a wonderful day.

My rules for posts, contests, and challenges that I am hosting: Original characters only, no copyrighted characters, no characters based on copyrighted characters, no characters based on RPG’s or other games. The characters must be your own design and not based on any character that might be copyrighted in any way. I have the right to delete any post that I believe crosses this line without warnings.