July 19, 2012 at 6:51 am #359
Just testing to see if i have created a topic properly.July 19, 2012 at 6:53 am #7727
Yey it’s working. O.K. so i have been using hero machine for a while and i have a build up of characters on my computer from contest etc. Just thought i’d share them.July 19, 2012 at 6:59 am #7728
First i started using this for some comic book characters that i had in mind. But that was ages ago and i hadn’t worked out a few neat tricks that i got by looking at AMS’s awesome stuff. So i’ll start Posting the originals and their counterparts.July 19, 2012 at 7:04 am #7730Patch is a drunken arsonist, using his mask to appear like a fire spitter.
July 19, 2012 at 7:08 am #7732Black Heart is the a Gang Leader who tricked the protagonist into killing his vigilante father. Black heart pumps his victims with a poison which numbs the victim, and turns their blood black. He then proceeds to pull out the heart of his victim, forcing them to watch as he crushes their heart. (dark stuff?)July 19, 2012 at 7:29 am #7735Before i do any more of the villains i’ll just put the main protagonists. Unfortunately i deleted the originals, so here are the revamped versions.The Liberator. He is the father of the main protagonist. An ex-cop and one of the first vigilante to help the city of [don’t have name, but it’s near a swamp, probably in Louisiana] with some of his other cop buddies. They were later shunned from society and only a few act covertly. He is accidentally killed by his son, Dylan, who is tricked by The Black Heart.Dylan is just an average school boy. If you exclude his suicide attempt. You see he doesn’t feel alive. So when his friend Benjamin gets involved with the Mob, to help pay of his ill farther’s debt to them, Dylan sees opportunity to live. But soon they see just how wrong they are, and are soon to deep. Meanwhile the Liberator keeps a watchful fatherly eye with the help of Dylan’s Uncle. In confusing struggle and shootout Dylan accidentaly kills his father. His Uncle takes the boys from the scene and removes his brothers body. Dylan dons his fathers mask, calling himself Limbo, and sets out to exact revenge. He is less forgiving than his father when it comes to criminals often killing them in rather inventive ways, this soon gets the better of him and he breaks down (mentally) for a short whileJuly 19, 2012 at 7:49 am #7738Benjamin is present at the unmasking of The Liberator (Dylan’s father) and feels heavilyresponsible for the events that occurred, he dons the old costume of The Liberators brother (Dylan’s Uncle): The Hand. The hand helps Limbo in the streets for a long time until they clash with The Mute. The Mute discovers The Hand’s identity and abducts him, putting him through terrible torture, involving barbed wire, to which The Mute is quite fond. He then leaves Limbo with a choice, save a building full of people or save Benjamin’s girlfriend. Limbo eventually chooses the building full of people. In a bid to save Benjamin Limbo goes for the hideout of The Mute and the following events are an explosion and confusion as to whether or not Benjamin or The Mute survived.Several Months Later someone naming themselves the Red Hand starts to confront Limbo and put those close to him in harms way. Revenge maybe?July 19, 2012 at 7:51 am #7739
Side note on the red mask: that lightning is meant to be barbed wire. Does it work?July 19, 2012 at 8:02 am #7740The Mute. He is a severely dangerous character. With special ops training and a majorly cracked mind he is more than a danger to the public. He was put to the knife by an unknown surgeon, and tortured for weeks, when he found himself in and abandoned dockyard building he found that his mouth had been sewn up and he had a mangled scar for a left eye. For some unknown reason he started to kill of people in a saw-esque sort of way, taunting the media and police, and eventually the vigilantesJuly 19, 2012 at 8:14 am #7741The Creature. Just a poor little deformed cannibal living in the cities sewers. A minor irritation compared to some of the other villains.July 19, 2012 at 8:22 am #7743Some point after Benjamin’s supposed death Limbo investigates a string of murders by poisoning. The deaths are mostly Pimps or men suspected of sleeping with prostitutes. Limbo discovers Sammy, a poor girl who due to bad circumstances had to get into prostitution. Unfortunately all of her pimps and most of her clients beat her. So she poisoned them before they had their way with her. Limbo helps her on her way to redemption. He grows to like her as he says to his friend Shane that they are “-both damaged. Maybe all we need is to help one another”.
I Accidentally deleted the originals for this too.July 19, 2012 at 8:31 am #7744In the case of ‘The Poisoness’ Limbo came to watching one of the most dangerous Pimps on the street. (He is however very much a comical stereotype). Pimp Le Dragon. The only way to describe him is a ‘character’, he wares an alligator skin jacket, has a mock golden gun and is always seen with his number one hoe Violet.July 19, 2012 at 8:38 am #7745It’s not Long before Dylan’s Father and Uncles old comrades start to notice the new levels of activity on the streets. The first to contact Dylan (through his uncle) is The Urban Wolf (crappy name, i know). Kane was a junior cop under Dylan’s Father’s wing when it was put forward that some should become vigilantes. He joined and immediately excelled, much like he did in the force. He took his own fathers old pilot mask, modified it and became The Urban Wolf. When he finds out what Dylan is up to he dusts of the old mask and helps to tutor Dylan, when Dylan Allows it.July 19, 2012 at 8:44 am #7747
Welcome to the forum, I especially like your remake of the creature. That’s scary stuff.July 19, 2012 at 8:58 am #7752Soon after The Mute scenario more crazies start to turn up and run havoc, all hinting to some unknown character, who is scarring individuals and letting them loose all over [un-named city].One of the denizens of crazies sent out is Mr Mongo. He is never alone though, seeing as he was lobotomized, he has trouble with even the simplest of decisions, and can’t even talk anymore. He used to be the muscle show at a travelling circus but was very intelligent, and well cultured, before he was lobotomized of course.
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