Willkommen, Scatman. I agree with Kaylin88100, but I am a minimalist myself. I like Hangman. Without a backstory, the wyvern seems tacked on to the picture.

Having said that, a closer look at the detail. Hangman's hands are on the outside of his sleeves / above the gauntlets. They are tacked on to the character. Might want to tweak that.

I love the levels of creativity that pour into your images. Really impressive!

I think for some of your more complex backgrounds, if you put some more contrast into the pieces, it might really help the details come together as a more complete image. In terms of settings, depending on the effect you want, you might make things that are further away lighter (or darker) than things further away.

If you haven't done something like this, (and if you have the ability to!), take some time out and find a place where you can look out across a very wide stretch of land, such as from on top a massive hill. Our eyes/brain have learned to read the cues to know what piece of the landscape is further away and which is closer. Try to figure out what these cues are (e.x. perspective, intensity of colors, hues, etc.) When we're drawing something, we're trying to create the illusion of depth (or some sort of 3Dness) on a 2D image. With HM, in some ways creating that illusion is easier than if we did it by hand, but in other ways it is harder. However, a lot of the principles are the same: how do we create the illusion of depth in a 2D image?

Sorry if I said anything you already know. In any case I hope it makes sense, and is helpful.

Scatman said

Thank you so much for your perspective(no pun intended)you know I really am tryin' hard to work with this 2D platform,and finding it kinda challenging using light from left light from right light from up down,you know what iI'm tryin' to say anyway,I look at some others and think how did they make that shine spot or how did they get that depth.So really thank you for the advise i just started with this thing and find it very addictive.I need all the non-objective critisizmIcan get and what you said brings light to alot of things(no pun intended)Thanx

No problem! I've been trying to figure it out myself, having rediscovered HM about a month-ish ago. AMS posted a guide on highlighting/shading under the "Tips" subsection of the art gallery. I don't know if you've seen it, or if it's an art style choice you'd want to take, but it was hugely helpful to me.

That is awesome

Creepy!