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		<title>Improv Comic: The first adventure of Stonewall Jaxon, PI</title>
		<link>http://www.heromachine.com/2008/09/01/improv-comic-the-first-adventure-of-stonewall-jaxon-pi/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 01 Sep 2008 14:29:39 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jeff Hebert</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Last week you all voted on the elements that would make up a comic book, like an audience shouting ideas at an improv comic troupe. Today I give you the first part of that collaborative effort, a story I&#8217;ve called &#8230; <a href="http://www.heromachine.com/2008/09/01/improv-comic-the-first-adventure-of-stonewall-jaxon-pi/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Last week <a href="http://www.heromachine.com/2008/08/18/the-first-comic-book-improv/">you all voted on the elements that would make up a comic book</a>, like an audience shouting ideas at an improv comic troupe. Today I give you the first part of that collaborative effort, a story I&#8217;ve called &#8220;Stonewall Jaxon in &#8216;The Case of the Trekky Time Snatch&#8217;&#8221;. I&#8217;ll be working on the conclusion this week. The issue is after the jump, and be warned &#8212; it&#8217;s about 330KB in size, so if you&#8217;re on dial-up it might take a minute or two. </p>
<p>Before I get to that, I wanted to say just a few words about the experience. First, creating a comic based on people voting on various random options (<a href="http://www.heromachine.com/2008/08/25/comic-book-improv-results/">the results are here</a>) is pretty fun. Coming up with a story and being forced to incorporate certain elements out of my control was a great challenge and I&#8217;m happy with the way it&#8217;s going so far. </p>
<p>Second, creating comics is hard work. I wasn&#8217;t going 100% on this due to all of the other responsibilities of the job, but still, most of my working time the past seven days was devoted to this project. And I only got three pages done. Granted, I also had to write the issue, and also granted I haven&#8217;t ever done this before, but still, that&#8217;s slower than I thought it would be. It&#8217;s given me a new level of respect for the folks who do this for a living. </p>
<p>Third, I understand why the Rob Liefelds of the world get pushed into leaving out backgrounds. They&#8217;re a ton of work and you don&#8217;t feel like they really do all that much. I mean, background is pretty much synonymous with &#8220;unnoticeable&#8221;. But I realized a funny thing while doing this &#8212; if you don&#8217;t draw it, it&#8217;s not there. All of those little bits of scenery like trash or bricks or clouds, the page doesn&#8217;t start out with those already there, waiting for you to draw the <em>interesting</em> stuff.</p>
<p>Finally, I drew all of this in Flash, using a template I created based on the ones available online for comics creators. I did this so that the whole issue would be in vector format, able to be output either for web resolution or for print. If it were ever to be colored you&#8217;d have to lose that flexibility, as the coloring would need to happen in a bitmap program like Photoshop, but at least the original ultra-high resolution lineart would still be available. </p>
<p>Now I hope you&#8217;ll join me after the jump for my very first effort ever at a comic book, and as far as I know, the first publicly-generated Comic Book Improv!</p>
<p><span id="more-1269"></span> </p>
<p><em>(<strong>Note</strong>: To change pages, click the arrow buttons at the top right and left. If you want to view this outside of the blog frame, <a href="http://www.heromachine.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2008/09/book1.swf">you can click here</a> &#8212; your browser should play it full-size in its own window, which you can scale as large as your monitor will allow instead of forcing it to be the width of this column. Let me know how that works!)</em></p>
<p><strong>Edited to add</strong>: Also, you can right-click on any part of the page and choose &#8220;Zoom in&#8221; to get a closer look.</p>
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		<title>Comic Book Improv results</title>
		<link>http://www.heromachine.com/2008/08/25/comic-book-improv-results/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 25 Aug 2008 15:33:06 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jeff Hebert</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[Comic Book Improv]]></category>

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		<description><![CDATA[For the first Comic Book Improv, apparently I will be creating a short comic book featuring the origin of &#8220;Stonewall&#8221; Jaxon, PI. Set in a major Earth city, at some point Stonewall will encounter some Ninja cheerleaders. You might be &#8230; <a href="http://www.heromachine.com/2008/08/25/comic-book-improv-results/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>For the first Comic Book Improv, apparently I will be creating a short comic book featuring the origin of &#8220;Stonewall&#8221; Jaxon, PI. Set in a major Earth city, at some point Stonewall will encounter some Ninja cheerleaders.</p>
<p>You might be asking yourself, &#8220;Self, how does that make any sense?&#8221; And your self will say &#8220;Dude, seriously, quit talking to me, it&#8217;s weird.&#8221; </p>
<p>Tune in next Monday to see the results of this first experiment! It&#8217;s not often you get the opportunity to see someone potentially fail so massively, so don&#8217;t miss it.</p>
<p><a href="http://bigfail.com/f/1000081.htm" target="_blank" rel="nofollow"><img src="http://images.bigfail.com/i/f/10/00/081.jpg" alt="Epic Fail"  height="400"  border="0" /></a></p>
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		<title>The First Comic Book Improv</title>
		<link>http://www.heromachine.com/2008/08/18/the-first-comic-book-improv/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 18 Aug 2008 22:25:12 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jeff Hebert</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[Comic Book Improv]]></category>

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		<description><![CDATA[As we discussed a couple of weeks ago, I&#8217;m going to try something that is, as far as I know, unprecedented in the comic book world: Comic Book Improv. This is very experimental and &#8220;out there&#8221;, and as a result &#8230; <a href="http://www.heromachine.com/2008/08/18/the-first-comic-book-improv/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>As we discussed <a href="http://www.heromachine.com/2008/08/07/comic-book-improv/">a couple of weeks ago</a>, I&#8217;m going to try something that is, as far as I know, unprecedented in the comic book world: Comic Book Improv. This is very experimental and &#8220;out there&#8221;, and as a result the PSF<a href="#note" name="top">*</a> is very high. Per the new mantra, however, we have <a href="http://www.heromachine.com/2008/08/14/permission-to-suck/">Permission to Suck</a>! If you&#8217;re daring enough to take part in what very well could be <del>an unmitigated disaster</del> the coolest thing ever to appear on the Internet, join me after the jump.</p>
<p><span id="more-1195"></span></p>
<p>First, this probably isn&#8217;t how the overall &#8220;Crowd Sourced Comic&#8221; will be, but until I figure out more of the detail on that and get some legal things figured out, I thought this would be a fun thing to try. </p>
<p>Second, having said that, here&#8217;s how this particular experiment will work. All you have to do is to vote on the various options below. After one week, I&#8217;ll take the highest vote-getting answer from each category and create a short comic book adventure (probably four pages) with it. With that, we&#8217;re off! Think of this as actors in a comedy troupe taking shouted suggestions from the audience for an improv routine.</p>
<h3>Character</h3>
<p>Choose one of the following six characters to appear as the main protagonist of the adventure (click each for a larger version). There are no female choices because this is difficult enough already and I suck at drawing women:</p>
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<a href='http://www.heromachine.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2008/08/atomicbazooka.png' title='atomicbazooka.png'><img src='http://www.heromachine.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2008/08/atomicbazooka.thumbnail.png' alt='atomicbazooka.png' /></a><a href='http://www.heromachine.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2008/08/banorjack.png' title='banorjack.png'><img src='http://www.heromachine.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2008/08/banorjack.thumbnail.png' alt='banorjack.png' /></a><a href='http://www.heromachine.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2008/08/cyberbarian.png' title='cyberbarian.png'><img src='http://www.heromachine.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2008/08/cyberbarian.thumbnail.png' alt='cyberbarian.png' /></a><br />
<a href='http://www.heromachine.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2008/08/foxxandpound.png' title='foxxandpound.png'><img src='http://www.heromachine.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2008/08/foxxandpound.thumbnail.png' alt='foxxandpound.png' /></a><a href='http://www.heromachine.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2008/08/slash.png' title='slash.png'><img src='http://www.heromachine.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2008/08/slash.thumbnail.png' alt='slash.png' /></a><a href='http://www.heromachine.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2008/08/stonewalljaxon.png' title='stonewalljaxon.png'><img src='http://www.heromachine.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2008/08/stonewalljaxon.thumbnail.png' alt='stonewalljaxon.png' /></a>
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		<strong class="poll-question">Which character should be the main protagonist of the Comic Book Improv?</strong>
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					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-233' value='233' name='dem_poll_39' />
					<label for='dem-choice-233'>Atomic Bazooka</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-234' value='234' name='dem_poll_39' />
					<label for='dem-choice-234'>Banorjack</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-235' value='235' name='dem_poll_39' />
					<label for='dem-choice-235'>Cybarbarian</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-236' value='236' name='dem_poll_39' />
					<label for='dem-choice-236'>Foxx & Pound</label>
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					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-237' value='237' name='dem_poll_39' />
					<label for='dem-choice-237'>Slash</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-238' value='238' name='dem_poll_39' />
					<label for='dem-choice-238'>"Stonewall" Jaxon, PI</label>
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<h3>Setting</h3>
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	<div class='democracy'>
		<strong class="poll-question">Choose one of the following potential settings for the adventure to take place in (note that you can add a new choice if you like -- be responsible!)</strong>
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					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-239' value='239' name='dem_poll_40' />
					<label for='dem-choice-239'>Another planet</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-240' value='240' name='dem_poll_40' />
					<label for='dem-choice-240'>Atlantis</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-241' value='241' name='dem_poll_40' />
					<label for='dem-choice-241'>Haunted dungeon</label>
			</li>
			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-242' value='242' name='dem_poll_40' />
					<label for='dem-choice-242'>Major Earth city</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-243' value='243' name='dem_poll_40' />
					<label for='dem-choice-243'>Outer space</label>
			</li>
			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-244' value='244' name='dem_poll_40' />
					<label for='dem-choice-244'>Rural America</label>
			</li>
			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-245' value='245' name='dem_poll_40' />
					<label for='dem-choice-245'>Skyscraper construction yard</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-246' value='246' name='dem_poll_40' />
					<label for='dem-choice-246'>Underground</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-264' value='264' name='dem_poll_40' />
					<label for='dem-choice-264'>Future Earth</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-266' value='266' name='dem_poll_40' />
					<label for='dem-choice-266'>1950's London</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-267' value='267' name='dem_poll_40' />
					<label for='dem-choice-267'>The Discworld</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-269' value='269' name='dem_poll_40' />
					<label for='dem-choice-269'>danger in alps</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-822' value='822' name='dem_poll_40' />
					<label for='dem-choice-822'>Savage Land</label>
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			<li> <a href='/category/comic-book-improv/feed/?dem_add_user_answer=true&dem_poll_id=40' rel='nofollow' onclick='return dem_addAnswer(this)' class='dem-add-answer'>Add an Answer</a>
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<h3>Plot</h3>
<div>
	<div class='democracy'>
		<strong class="poll-question">Choose one of the following potential plots for the adventure:</strong>
		<div class='dem-results'>
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					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-247' value='247' name='dem_poll_41' />
					<label for='dem-choice-247'>Alien invasion</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-248' value='248' name='dem_poll_41' />
					<label for='dem-choice-248'>Fraternity initiation gone wrong</label>
			</li>
			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-249' value='249' name='dem_poll_41' />
					<label for='dem-choice-249'>Hero on a date</label>
			</li>
			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-250' value='250' name='dem_poll_41' />
					<label for='dem-choice-250'>Natural catastrophe</label>
			</li>
			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-251' value='251' name='dem_poll_41' />
					<label for='dem-choice-251'>Origin story</label>
			</li>
			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-252' value='252' name='dem_poll_41' />
					<label for='dem-choice-252'>Super-team tryouts</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-253' value='253' name='dem_poll_41' />
					<label for='dem-choice-253'>Slugfest (senseless, random, violent fight)</label>
			</li>
			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-254' value='254' name='dem_poll_41' />
					<label for='dem-choice-254'>Villain(s) threatens innocent civilians</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-255' value='255' name='dem_poll_41' />
					<label for='dem-choice-255'>Villain(s) are robbing a bank</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-256' value='256' name='dem_poll_41' />
					<label for='dem-choice-256'>Villain(s) have set a trap for the hero</label>
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<h3>Random Element</h3>
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		<strong class="poll-question">Choose a random element to incorporate into the story in some way  (note that you can add a new choice if you like -- keep it clean!):</strong>
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					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-257' value='257' name='dem_poll_42' />
					<label for='dem-choice-257'>Eight-tentacled space kraken</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-258' value='258' name='dem_poll_42' />
					<label for='dem-choice-258'>Exploding beer truck</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-259' value='259' name='dem_poll_42' />
					<label for='dem-choice-259'>Forgotten wallet</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-260' value='260' name='dem_poll_42' />
					<label for='dem-choice-260'>Ninja cheerleaders</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-261' value='261' name='dem_poll_42' />
					<label for='dem-choice-261'>Rhinoceros stampede</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-262' value='262' name='dem_poll_42' />
					<label for='dem-choice-262'>Subpoena served</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-263' value='263' name='dem_poll_42' />
					<label for='dem-choice-263'>A busful of tourists</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-265' value='265' name='dem_poll_42' />
					<label for='dem-choice-265'>Giant robot</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-268' value='268' name='dem_poll_42' />
					<label for='dem-choice-268'>The Grim Reaper/Death</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-270' value='270' name='dem_poll_42' />
					<label for='dem-choice-270'>Multiplying aliens</label>
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					<label for='dem-choice-823'>Terrible Blood Death Monster with powers of Nature and Animals</label>
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			<li>
					<input type='radio' id='dem-choice-1233' value='1233' name='dem_poll_42' />
					<label for='dem-choice-1233'>Giant monsters</label>
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<p><em>*PSF: Potential Suckage Factor. <a href="#top" name="note">Return to top.</a></em></p>
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